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for Marriage Law

by teshara

person BakaChan
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written... I hazard to say one of the best of the WIKTT Marrage L aw ones out there. I especally liked you incorperating Helga into it... the mirror idea was great.
person clara
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
person Hawklaw
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story -- very enjoyable and well written. St. Petersburg sounds fascinating! Everyone is staying fairly well in character, but you nailed Molly Weasely spot dead on! Looking forward to updates.
person SandraM
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Encore! Encore! I think I like Helga, she\'ll keep the males hopping.
person Raven
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very well written. Keeps you one your toes! Please update soon.
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is Hermione ever going to notice that Severus is a man??? And NOT a roommate.
Keep writing.
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There is no shame in taking a plot bunny and manipulating it. I understaour our comment about the cheese factor... a difficult thing to avoid. I keep noticing all the different bathrooms people create and once more I say-- I WANT ONE TOO!!!! If only I had a bath like the ones we write. Love the idea. Keep writing.
Da Feather
person Ali
schedule January 31, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable, but I feel compelled to point out that in Britain \'fanny\' has an entirely different connotation. If you mean backside, say so. ;-)