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by teshara

person GoddessByline
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now I\'m confussed.
I\'ve been following this fic, but this chapter I don\'t get... Are they in Russia now? If so, there must be a chapter mig?
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If your chapter numbers are correct... Chap 16 should come before this one.

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person Liah
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
there seems to bee a chapter missing....could you please post it asap??
this is a lovely story and i can\'t wait to see wheen severus and hermione get some action..:P
very well written with a good plot. please post the missing chapter!!!
person lise
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story - i rather liked the slow buildup, makes the story much, much more believable, and thus more... fulfilling? ;) i would be happy to read more
person saintthistle
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I *love* this story, I can\'t wait for the next chapter, but one question... Are we missing chapter 16? The story leapt from Snapes bedroom in Hogwarts to their bedroom, I assume, issiassia and the numbering d\'t \'t seem to follow either. Keep up the good work I look forward to reading the rest of this :)
person spaz141
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I guess they\'ll figure things out in Russia. Thanks for the update.
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My heart aches for them both. Update soon?
person spaz141
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update. Shame on Severus for getting his wife drunk then simply putting her to bed...alone. Geesh.
person Beatrice
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great! The UST is rising. I lthatthat you are such a prolific writer; please don\'t walk away from your computer now...
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually....my mother was a falconer. Owls do not mate on the wing. Neither do ravens. Having loads of experience with birds.....it\'d be kinda hard for them to. However.....birds do play mg gag games with each other. For example....an eagle will pick up a small rock and with their foot throw it at their prospective (or actual) mate. The other bird catches it and throws it back. A game of toss. I can go into more detail if you like as mt mother did pass her knowledge onto me. I would also be very happy to help!

On another note.....you have a wonderful story here! I am enjoying it immencely and am hoping for quick updates! I love the way you did Helga Hufflepuff. hehe Bellissimo!
person Estrilda
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay - another plea for a bit of snarky interchange between Helga and Severus - someone needs to tell him he needs to conte hte his marriage or he needs to catch Hermione with a verbal acknowledgement of her desire for him during her little fantasies. please?