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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I think this story is great. I for forward to reading the next one. :)
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far. Just one thing, the chapters skipped from fifteen to seventeen, and there is now a big gap in the story. Please repost so we can follow along. Thanks
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm.... Russia.... intriguing. There is only one problem though... a chapter seems to be missing... perhaps an accident when you went to post it?
Still Reading,
Da Feather
Still Reading,
Da Feather
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story but what happened to chapter 16?
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and entertaining story. I particularly like that Snape\'s parents are a) alive and b) not monstrous. That\'s quite unusual in the realms of fanfic.
Incidentally, Chapter 16 appears to have gone AWOL. Any idea where it ran off to?
(Oh, and you also might want to know -- in U.K. English, \"fanny\" refers to female genitalia, rather than one\'s behind.)
Incidentally, Chapter 16 appears to have gone AWOL. Any idea where it ran off to?
(Oh, and you also might want to know -- in U.K. English, \"fanny\" refers to female genitalia, rather than one\'s behind.)
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been enjoying this a lot. I like Helga, what a sweetie, as befits the founder of Hufflepuff. Poor Sev, he is a bit of a perv, lusting after a young pretty girl, gods, that\'s so ...normal, how dare he? LOL
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good so far! Keep going! Severus seems nicer than most other authors describe him,though :) like that. But where did chappie 16 go?
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
maybe its just me...but umm... thoes last 2 chapters dont flow.... did you maybe skipp adding one? er?
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes they are too funny. Thanks.
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is there a chapter missing?