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for Mirror, Mirror

by Avrild

person tny1111
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another great chapter... I\'m intersted to see if this Hermione ends up pregnant. Would it be her husband\'s or Snape\'s? Nice to know that they are all taking it so well... maybe too well? (hint hint)

Now on to the bet... Yes NegativeNine has a great memory and was right in taking your dietary restrictions into consideration (damn her!!) So I\'ll have to up the ante... hummmm... Ahhh -- Flowers!! What woman doesn\'t like virtual flowers!! A few exotic ones highlighting a bouquet of wild flowers... Not tacky, just unusual...
person jkrazed
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, you know it\'s an alternate realm when the Ministry is fair, swift, and efficient. Great chapter!
person genrou
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm..interesting interesting. well i guess its up to hermione and alternate snape to get them switched, now. and i wonder wat snape is going to do in this new world he is stck in. write more soon. thanks.
person NegativeNine
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
P Cak Cakes? Cookies? Hah! I can\'t bake, but I can find someone that can. Not only that, but I can find someone that can cook without that funky wheatthing that April can\'t eat.

April, was it Fish and Chips you were talking about a few WIKTT chats ago? Yeah. I can hook you up with that.

No, no money has been talked about. LittleBird is a gambling fiend; cut-throat poker for kittens -you know the type I\'m sure.

But seriously, this is a great story. I love the way you\'re writing both the lives \"as they could have been\" out. It\'s like reading two great fanfics all at once. Chapter three, e Sne Snape describes seducing Hermione is so wonderful. He comes across as both creepy and stalkerish, and seriously lovesick and romantic. I love how he passes out on Hermione\'s shoulder after whispering that he loves his \"Clever girrrrl.
person genrou
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
man...thats wicked! the premise of this story is so amazingly and unbelieveably cool. im just in awe of it..sure you stole it off pkd or st but i never saw it in hpff. man its just too cool. and its neat flipping btwn realities. though i hope that you wont continue n route the way pkd stories usually go- they tend to leave me depressed, tramatized, and awed (hopefully you understand what i mean).
please, please, please write more soon.
thanks.
person jenbachand
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:) It\'s really cute. I\'m loving it. Update soon. I like the switching between the two universes.

Jen :)
person LaRoseNoire
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting better and better. Most good stories make give you plenty of SS/HG interaction, but this one has two Hermiones, two Snapes and 8 different relationships to explore and dissect! Lovely! I look forward to more.
person shiv5468
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even nice snape\'s quite predatory isn\'t he? I like that, I can\'t see him ever being \'nice\' properly. He\'s always going to be a bit of a bastard.
person AnaNg
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this one- I think you\'ve done the unthinkable and come up with an unused SS/HG plotline! Please update soon!! :)
person tny1111
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Soooo you can be bribed huh? hehehe Well, I\'ll start by tempting you with a veritable smorgasbord of baked good... pies, cookies, cakes? Sound good? Well, that\'s just for starters... NegativeNine -- are you going to up the ante?

Seriously though, great story!! I love this idea and it has so much potential. I\'ll admit that I may lose this bet (I never saw that episode of star trek, so I\'m in the dark on your inspiration), but no matter what -- we\'ll all be winners for reading suchondeonderful story!! Thank you!!