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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting to see other Snape with his excited take on the world and Hermione\'s life. If they are able to switch back (ok, I may be conceeding defeat here --I guess-- that he is other relm and not crazy) then it will be interesting to see if Hermione will use her new knowledge of other relm Snape to bring out the best in her Snape. Lots of possibilities!!
As for the bet... I\'m sure a fine writer, such as yourself, could still add in a plot twist where he is crazy -- after all any slick talking guy can impress mom right? (ok, not my mom... but someone\'s mom right?) Anyway... to that end I will up the ante once again in hopes that the loony bin comes a callin for Sevvy.. Let\'s see... we are now at a bouquet of roses, a foot massage, and since you have the flu -- how about a \"Hope you get well soon\" care package. Tissues, appropriate pharmacy products, broth, a steamy video and a large obnoxious balloon screaming \"Get Well Soon!!\"
Hope you feel better soon!!
As for the bet... I\'m sure a fine writer, such as yourself, could still add in a plot twist where he is crazy -- after all any slick talking guy can impress mom right? (ok, not my mom... but someone\'s mom right?) Anyway... to that end I will up the ante once again in hopes that the loony bin comes a callin for Sevvy.. Let\'s see... we are now at a bouquet of roses, a foot massage, and since you have the flu -- how about a \"Hope you get well soon\" care package. Tissues, appropriate pharmacy products, broth, a steamy video and a large obnoxious balloon screaming \"Get Well Soon!!\"
Hope you feel better soon!!
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A/N:
Dear LittleBird,
I\'m touched by your lovely bribes. For your eyes only I will write a special epilogue and send it to you! Feel free to share it as long as you give me credit. I\'ll be glad to write this as soon as the main story is over.
hugs, April
Dear LittleBird,
I\'m touched by your lovely bribes. For your eyes only I will write a special epilogue and send it to you! Feel free to share it as long as you give me credit. I\'ll be glad to write this as soon as the main story is over.
hugs, April
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I\'m really enjoying Mr Mir Mirror so far. I\'m reading each new chapter the moment I receive the email from WIKTT. I haven\'t read a narrative like this one before, and I\'ll be interested to see where to take the story.
I have one recommendation though: halfway through chapter 4 you describe Hermione removing Snape\'s \'knickers.\' This word is usually used to describe women\'s underwear. I\'m not sure if that\'s what you intended, but if it\'s not I would suggest changing it to underwear or something like that (you could even avoid the age-old \'boxers or briefs\' question :) )
I look forward to the next chapter.
Serenbel xxx
I have one recommendation though: halfway through chapter 4 you describe Hermione removing Snape\'s \'knickers.\' This word is usually used to describe women\'s underwear. I\'m not sure if that\'s what you intended, but if it\'s not I would suggest changing it to underwear or something like that (you could even avoid the age-old \'boxers or briefs\' question :) )
I look forward to the next chapter.
Serenbel xxx
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I meant chapter 5... I\'m syuch a dimwit sometime
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Serenbel xxx
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Serenbel xxx
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Loved the ending, with the other Snape telling jokes to Hermione\'s parents... can\'t wait to see what happens when (if?) she meets up with her real Snape again...
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this premise, it\'s a great alternative to the Time Turner fics - a superb premise for showing different aspects of the characters. Yay! Hope you feel better soon, I\'ve been fighting the \'flu myself and can empathize! :p
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heh heh, memory like a steel thingy.
Flowers? That was the best you could come up with? Flowers? (actually, that was pretty good. I\'m just hoping the tone I use makes it seem silly and gives you doubts. \"fear is the mind killer.\")
Alright, I\'ll see your \"flowers\" and raise you a foot-rub. That\'s right. A foot-rub. Because the only thing a woman loves more than flowers is a foot-rub.
OhmanOhmanOhman, the Snapes are stuck in the worlds they\'re in? That\'s almost too cool for words, because then the side-bet is whether they\'re going to find a way to get back, or if they\'re going to make the best of a \"bad\" situation.... ohmanohmanohman. No matter how this ends it\'s going to be totally cool!
heh, and the idea of Snape half in/half out the window is good enought to keep me waiting patiently until text ext chapter s uss us further into this story!
Flowers? That was the best you could come up with? Flowers? (actually, that was pretty good. I\'m just hoping the tone I use makes it seem silly and gives you doubts. \"fear is the mind killer.\")
Alright, I\'ll see your \"flowers\" and raise you a foot-rub. That\'s right. A foot-rub. Because the only thing a woman loves more than flowers is a foot-rub.
OhmanOhmanOhman, the Snapes are stuck in the worlds they\'re in? That\'s almost too cool for words, because then the side-bet is whether they\'re going to find a way to get back, or if they\'re going to make the best of a \"bad\" situation.... ohmanohmanohman. No matter how this ends it\'s going to be totally cool!
heh, and the idea of Snape half in/half out the window is good enought to keep me waiting patiently until text ext chapter s uss us further into this story!
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say I love the plot you have going....looking forward to the next chapter.
D.A.
D.A.
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
April,
I\'ve only been on-line sporadically this past month or so and I must say that I was quite happy to log on to this site today and see that you had started a new story. This is a wonderfully original and compelling story and you have once again managed to draw the reader in through well written and thoughtful description, narrative and dialogue. I look forward to reading more chapters as you post them!
~Jules
I\'ve only been on-line sporadically this past month or so and I must say that I was quite happy to log on to this site today and see that you had started a new story. This is a wonderfully original and compelling story and you have once again managed to draw the reader in through well written and thoughtful description, narrative and dialogue. I look forward to reading more chapters as you post them!
~Jules
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very intriguing -- and Severus\'s description in chapter 3 of how he and Hermione got together made my jaw drop; I\'ve never read anything like that before!