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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The realization Hermione (is it no. 1 or no. 2?) has about how disorienting it would be to suddenly wake up in a world that was similar but not the same sums the whole story up.
I doe the the fact that your story allows you to include the OotP characterizations (spoilt Harry, dead Sirius) while also providing a happier version of life.
Despite my occasional confusion, I\'m intrigued. I\'m interested to see where you take us!
I doe the the fact that your story allows you to include the OotP characterizations (spoilt Harry, dead Sirius) while also providing a happier version of life.
Despite my occasional confusion, I\'m intrigued. I\'m interested to see where you take us!
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just can\'t get over what a fantasic story this is!! Ahe dhe drama and the multiple story lines... sooo cool!! To be able to see how each choice affected Severus\' and and the lives around him is astonishing. And nice touch with \'our\' Hermione not giving in to \'other relm\' Severus\' inquiries on how passionate she was... I can see her not being easily swayed.
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Goatee - grrooowwwlll! Yummy! :) Loved the chapter... especially liked this line:
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hooked I\'m hooked I\'m hooked. This is the best SS/HG that I\'ve found in *AGES*. Thank you sooo much for sharing it with us.
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow- two chapters. well i just got through 5. i was actually suprised that herm ione didnt believe him- not that blame her. and i guess astime goes on she\'s figuring he is telling the truth. its gunna be sad when he does go back to his wife though. well thanks.
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*ahem* well.. i was gunna say something aobut how tortourous that world was for him...but um..i might beg to differ now...well not really cause he\'ll see the next moring. OH! and the slut thing- that had my jaw dropping and the line right after made it 10x better.
hmm.. i wonder if he\'ll go on meeting sirious..and oh i wonder what wolud the other snape think when he sees what other people are dead in that world.
cool..i wonder what will happen next. please write more soon. thanks.
hmm.. i wonder if he\'ll go on meeting sirious..and oh i wonder what wolud the other snape think when he sees what other people are dead in that world.
cool..i wonder what will happen next. please write more soon. thanks.
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LittleBird. You are a dog. A lucky, lucky dogu wiu will share wonyou?you? She said you could. You lucky dog.
Wow April, that was a pretty intense chapter. (I know I say that a lot, but I don itn it.) The scene at the end was probably the most... sexually raw and intense scene I\'ve read in a long, long time. The neediness that they both displayed can be explored on so many levels, and it really opens this story up to some intense possiblilities. I c go go on, but sometimes it\'s best if I don\'t. Let me just say: Wow.
...well, that and: Sorry for using the word \"intense\" too much. But you get the idea I hope.
Wow April, that was a pretty intense chapter. (I know I say that a lot, but I don itn it.) The scene at the end was probably the most... sexually raw and intense scene I\'ve read in a long, long time. The neediness that they both displayed can be explored on so many levels, and it really opens this story up to some intense possiblilities. I c go go on, but sometimes it\'s best if I don\'t. Let me just say: Wow.
...well, that and: Sorry for using the word \"intense\" too much. But you get the idea I hope.
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, when I first saw the blurb for this it looked kind of silly, but this is a really great story. Poor Severus, both of them. I can\'t wait for your next chapter.
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*reads chapter 6*
Wow, that was... wow. Bravo, very well written indeed, I enjoyed Snape\'s confusion with this new world immensely. Looking forward to more!
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I love the way that Snape gets along with Hermione\'s mother. Almost makes me wonder if he\'s finding a way to seduce this Hermione if he\'s trapped in this realm after all.