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for Mirror, Mirror

by Avrild

person uscarchie
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"there was also SS/HG time travel story involving a potion gone wrong. The name escapes me, but I
person NegativeNine
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! The plot thickens! The blue/red wizards of course remind me of the non-death eaters that tortured the CanonSnape. B

That bit where Hermione \"knows\" about the reason the Ministry does the annulments, and about how her body felt when she got back to it. Wow, that was very emotional and beautifully written. I mean, I could totally see/imagine how she would be battling herself, between wanting the (I don\'t know what to call him) the SpySnape, but still missing HerSnape. On the otherhand, I can see her wanting to be faithful, but then rationalizing it that if it\'s a \"Snape, it\'s all good.\"

-Only with better words because Hermione is far more articulate than I.

Nicely written, and with the thicker plot (sounds like a lable on a soup can doesn\'t it?) this means that story is nore nre near ending (which is a bit of a fear for me.)

Cool. Looking forward to the next chapter!
person NegativeNine
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And I disagree with LittleBird. I didn\'t pick up any of the \"revenge shag\" sort of feel from this. I think that, sure, Hermione might be hurt about it, but I think she also understands. I mean, if she wanted revenge, she could have easily asked him whether or not they had sex, and then make his life hell when he lied *or* told the truth. I think that she\'s honestly in love with Snape. Any Snape.

And if I were her *insert sad sigh here* I\'d be too.
person Mel
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bloody scream* WHAT THE HELL IS THAT DESIES!??!!?!? They found a way back soon, \'eh? Bravo!! And the Blue and Red wizards hate him? How... Unfortunate. Oh well. Go kids go!!! *cheers*
person LittleBird
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is it just me or is this some sort of revenge for \"other realm\" Snape shagging \"second other realm\" Hermione? It also looks like even though \"o Sna Snape is afraid of staying he\'s more afraid of leaving. After giving up so much of his life spying, I want him to be happy!! Let\'s hope that Hermione\'s plan works -- er, or not -- it sounds like things could get very tricky from here... (hanging tighter to the rollercoaster, \'cusis iis is going to be one heck of a ride!!)
person genrou
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooo, does this mean that they will both get switched into their others\' lives? interesting. and boy would it be hell.
and i think its quite nifty how other hermione seems to one up whatever the other snape had said. its kindany. ny.
oh, and poor snape he\'s getting so overwhelmed.
please write more soon. thanks.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-8.... This is a WONDERFUL story & am glad that I have found it!!! It is very unique & I really like how you have written all of the characters!!! I am very much looking forward to reading it to the end & can\'t wait to see what chapter 9 holds!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person genrou
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooo ^____^ im always so exicited to see the changes/differences between the two. and its cool that happry got to get a glimpse of it. but, ive got to disagree with (the other) severus somewhat. this may be hell for him but i believe what severus is experencing is far worse.
oh and i appreciate how hermione isnt jumpinm (wm (well, at least not yet).
please do write more soon. thanks.
person NegativeNine
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Boy, the canon characters are really intrigued by this Lycanthrope thing aren\'t they? I wonder if that maybe how most cures and breakthroughs are instigated, through Transconveyance? What an interesting thought...

Heh, and I have to agree with WendyNat, the goatee is a yummy idea.
person Mel
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAA!! You can\'t just leave us hanging there!! I like Severus\'s annalisis of Harry. \"He\'s a spoilt brat.\" Couldn\'t have said it better myself. :-D Poor guy... :-( That\'s just got to tear a hole in his heart... *sigh* So tell me, what is this cure that they invented?