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by Avrild

person LittleBird
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a homecoming... er.. otherrealmcoming for Hermione!! Snape\'s shagging comment when she left was very funny (and how typical of men.) Interested to see how she handles being in the other realm and seeing the people that mean so much to her. Hope she is able to find the time to read up on thee (oe (or enough so that she can work with Snape to develop it much faster.) I want to see them happy together!!

person Karen
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m looking forward to seeing AU Hermione shift into Hermione and bounce Miss Granger into her body. It\'ll be fun to see Severus and Hermione play at being Sarah\'s parents while learning everything about the cure for lycanthropy. I\'m wondering about the identity of the red and blue clad wizards, though.

person NegativeNine
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
influenza\'s right, the pervyHooch was/is awesome! That\'s just so funny, and then having Hermione quiz him on his \"sex god\" status... that\'s even better. Looking forward to reading more. Sorry if this comes across as a lame review.

person Jenny
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m just catching up after some time not able to read - I\'m really impressed with what I\'ve seen sr, ar, and I look forward to the rest that\'s here, and to the rest overall.

Just one quick point on this chapter, though. It\'s the \"timbre\" of Severus\' mind that\'s different, not the \"timber\". The latter is wood, the former is tone. :)
person Jenny
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Coo ....

I hope the next chapter comes soon ...
person aprilgrey
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A/N: Thanks Jenny for the heads up: I always appreciate it when a reader brings such things to my attention. However, timber can relate to either wood or the qualities of a person. Timbre only deals with sound, although it could also be the sound of a person\'s voice, so why not the sound of person\'s mind? However, I will stick with timber. LOL. I guess that makes Sevvy a blockhead?!!!

It was his mind but the timber was different. The bitterness was still there, but it had been tempered and gentled. And it was amused by Harry and his reactions to it. (from Chap. 7)

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person influenza1918
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
On my quest to leave more reviews!

I am definitely having fun with this story - there are elements of angst, sure, but on the whole, there is a pervading sense of humor that I find refreshing. I\'m always a sucker for someone with a good sense of humor. Love the idea of Perv!Hooch.
person jkrazed
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9.... Sounds like things are really starting to happen all the way around!!! I very much enjoyed the entire recount of their evening of clubbing, nicely added humor!!!

I am wondering if the regular Severus will be wanting this Hermione when he returns? I have a feeling that after these 2 do what they are about to do that this Hermione will WANT him!!!

Harry sounds as untrusting of Severus as ever!!! I wonder what the wand will show & am curious if he will take it to Olivander\'s to see who it belongs to? Still wondering about the red & blue clad wizard brothers from chapter 8, but am sure that they will be making another showing eventually!!!

Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^<
person Alison of the Faeries
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work so far! I can\'t wait for the next.