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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can\'t wait to see who the guy Hermione\'s got her sights set on, though I could proably guess.
Tiffany
Tiffany
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on. Don\'t leave us in suspense. Who is going to be with Hermione? Hope it\'s Harry as Hermione means t tot to him. I do hope Ginny gets with Sevvie. They sound good together. Hope Harry and Hermione get together. They also look good.
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, keep them comeing
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far.
Don\'t break up H/G. They are so hard to find on this web site as it is and if you do
find them thinthing god awful happens to them.
Can\'t wait to read more.
TTFN
K
Don\'t break up H/G. They are so hard to find on this web site as it is and if you do
find them thinthing god awful happens to them.
Can\'t wait to read more.
TTFN
K
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Please update again and soon.
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh you\'ve gotta finish this story. It\'s great. I wanna see why Snape wants to talk to Harry. Hope we see some pairing. I would love to see Harry and Hermione get together and Snape and Ginny. Hopefully. Keep it up mate.
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You might want to consider using some story codes to denote who is paired with who. I don\'t nessasarily want to read several chapters in to find that it\'s a couple I have no stomach for. By your summary I\'d assumed it was Harry/Severus, but that is a mute point. It is very well written, but my internet time is too too limited to not know what I\'m getting into. Perhaps lable whether or not it is slash or het?
Elvis
Elvis
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the story, but it does seem to be wandering away from the original plot quite a bit. I just wonder when Harry and Snape will interact again or even talk to someone else about the situation. If not then that really isn\'t the point of the story and maybe you should continue on but change the teaser? Anyhow, I\'m still reading either way cuz it\'s really good :)
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*giggles and snorts at your shout-outs*
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the attention to detail and the alignment of the story\'s facts with that from the actual series. The relationship between Snape and Harry is of course intriguing, and the dialogue was written well. I think I liked the first four chapters best, as I could actually envision them and believe them for the mostpart. I hold objections to the 5th chapter but perhaps that is just my own personal dislike for romance scenes. Keep it up and I look forward to the following chapters to come.