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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your fic is so dark, I can\'t see.
Dark can be theaputic too. What is next? When will they meet? I am assuming that Snape does not succeed, right?
Dark can be theaputic too. What is next? When will they meet? I am assuming that Snape does not succeed, right?
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so interested in where this story is going. I love dark fics and I love the Hermione/Snape ship or just even interaction. It\'s amazing wellwell those to characters mold together.
This fic really reminds me of some lyrics I worship from a song by Ben Kweller called Falling \"Trees fall and so do men. Even the walls start caving in and you feel like there\'s no pretend for you.\"
This fic really reminds me of some lyrics I worship from a song by Ben Kweller called Falling \"Trees fall and so do men. Even the walls start caving in and you feel like there\'s no pretend for you.\"
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!!
I really loved the first two chapters of your story; the perfect quality of dark angst through Severus eyes first, then life through Hermione\'s point of view. I have to praise the beauty of your writing.
Excellent start,
Can
I really loved the first two chapters of your story; the perfect quality of dark angst through Severus eyes first, then life through Hermione\'s point of view. I have to praise the beauty of your writing.
Excellent start,
Can
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Great first chapter. I really loved the end, how you set the mood for the next chapter. Please keep writing, I look forward to your next chapter.
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! I like this so far, a lot......mm......brooding dark silent sullen man.....*sigh* More please!
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn, the last few sentences were really compelling! I like what you wrote so far and I hope you update soon!
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The last paragraph gave me chills. Well done! Looking forward to more.
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it the title of the story and the summary thingie really drew me in and the story itself was beautifully writen and just kept a person readiing. As another reviewer said the final paragraph is amazing.
keep up the good work! I am dying for more.
keep up the good work! I am dying for more.