rate_review Reviews

Brilliant! Fantastic! Bravo! I\'m not a fan of diaries but I love the plot and format . so when are you going to have the next chapter up? next week? tommorow? today? five minutes?

While I enjoy the general premise and diary style construct, I must point out that there are major inconsistencies in this story. Hogwarts generally does not finish until later in June, not in May, and if Snape is the same age as Harry\'s parents would have been, how can the age difference be only 16 years? I doubt Lily and James Potter had Harry whilst still in school. The time turner may have added a few months to Hermione\ge, ge, but not 2-3 years. I do recommend also that you do a little more showing and a little less telling; this will improve the quality of the story. Cheers.

I really like the prologue. You\'ve taken the time to give the history of what everyone went through and how they\'ve changed before jumping into the marriage. That will make it easier to explain how their relationship could develop at all given their history in the books. Please continue.

This is a great first chapter. I love it. Usually I skip a few paragraphs and go to the meat of the story, but i was stuck to each word like glue. Please, please write a new chapter soon.

A lot happens in the first chapter and i love it, I can\'t wait to see what Snape\'s reaction will be, I also appreciate the fact that Hermione isn\'t infatuated with Snape beforehand, I also like the diary style entry.

Wow - what a great beginning to this challenge! A truly original approach... I can\'t wait to read more!

Wow.
This is one of the best, if not THE best answer to that challenge.
I loved reading it and simply could not go to sleep before I had finished and now just have to review too...
Update soon, this is marvellous!


Len(almost 4am.. jee)