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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this very much and I can\'t wait to see it continued! I\'ll admit that, at first, I wasn\'t certain that the diary format was going to work, but it\'s really came off quite brilliantly.
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That first chapter was so good.....I sat down to read what I thought to be some little fluff of the wedding law.....I was surprised to find myself intriqued with a fabulous read......your first chapter was well written and I am really hoping that you continue this.
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! I can\'t wait to see what you have for us in the coming chapters!!! Keep up the good work!
Hugs,
Gwen
Hugs,
Gwen
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting take on the WIKITT challenge. Neat spin. Keeping the alliteration in the family with Severus\' stepmom, hunhess ess Harry is the head of the family even though he\'s younger because Hermione was adopted in? Anyway, I\'m quite anxious to see what comes of this. Thanks very much for writing!
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, I think this could be the best Marriage Challenge fic ever! What a brilliant prologue! You\'ve certainly got me on the edge of my seat. Loved the Hermione becoming a Potter bit, too! Keep this up please - I start reading so many fics that just peter out after a few chapters. Blessings, Kait
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! COOL FIC! I hope you update it soon. The only problem I see is a mistake with the diary entry dates- you have September, then August, then October.
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely wonderful so far. I do hope that you are going to continue it. If so, i cant wait to find out how Snape is going to react when he finds out. Am i right in guessing he will be most flabbergasted at first? Please do consider continuing if you werent at first.
Sincerely,
Sarah S.
Sincerely,
Sarah S.
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take on the challenge....I don\'t think I\'ve seen any others from a diary perspective like this. You will want to check this back through more carefully though. Your dates aren\'t completely chronological; I\'m sure through simple typographical errors as you wrote (possibly at different times). It can be a bit confusing. I\'ll be interested to see Severus\' take on all of this as well......
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thanks for removing the italics - i didnt have to squint once...did hope for a new chapter though...hint hint K xxx
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey, this is a great start! i\'m looking forward to more chapters REALLY soon!