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by Templar

schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Prologue is ok. Where is the rest? Will I be sble to see it?
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Meep
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this is an amazing beginning to what looks like an amazing story. Please update this soon, and when you do, could you please contact me? I enjoy this story very much so far, and would like to be able to follow it and see how it turns out. There were no spelling or grammatical errors that I saw, and the writing was just spectacular! I don\'t know what else to say except: keep on writing!

--Meep

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person sharkdiver1980
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...you so need to continue this!!!!
person Nocturnus
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a refreshing and new aproach to the challenge.
The pace, the plot and the way Hermione see the world that sorround her it
person Kate McGuire
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like this very much. I love the diary format and the fact that for a change it is Snape left in the dark until the last minute and HermHermione.
person Ashley McD
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I haven\'t read any marrige law fics written quite like that and the change in style is refreshing after fic after fic in the same or similar styles. Do you have a way to update me when you post another cahpter? Thanks and keep up the good work!!!
person Merrideth
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I WANT TO READ MORE!!!
person Topaz
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your approach to this story...the diary form makes it easy to read and your story is definitely different from many of the other muggle law stories written. I look forward to reading more.
person Stratyllis
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so wonderful. I usually don\'t like journal fics. This one is really nice though. I like that you made Hermione Harry\'s sister. I can\'t wait to see what Severus will do when he finds out that he has to get married. I love all of the clan stuff too. How often are you going to update?