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for Twisted Game

by Silveritas

person FuMan Skeeto
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice fic you got there! is it one-shot fic? either way it\'s ok.
person JennaSlytherin
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I seriously love this...

Hermione is going to the dark side? That\'s awesome because not many fics show Hermione change for Draco, only Draco changing for Hermione....

You have to continue!!!!!
person ali
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this was great, please keep more coming but won\'t voldemort just kill hermione?
person tom4eva
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really...witty....

continue....
person Pixie
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you can\'t be serious?! that\'s all you plan on putting?! you can\'t stop there! what happens? tell me! lol. please, please, don\'t leave it there. this is so unique, never have i seen a plot like this before. please continue the story... please. lol.
person LilyMarielle
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!ICKEICKED STORY!!!! IT\'S AMAZING, YOU CAN\'T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT! KEEP UPDATING PLEASE!
person paws10081
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
dis is really gd so far. i hope ders alot more soon
person elementaldeity
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, really good foreplay scene, very discriptive, but you lost something of that in the acual sex, it was too fast to completion, if you know what i mean. Otherwise, I like the idea of Hermione changing sides for Draco, I like that he was being honest with her about his involvement, I hate when a fanfiction Drclaiclaims innocence, knowing damn well that the Dark Lord would not allow him to remain on the sidelines. Keep writting I will read and review all since i like your style so far.
person Campy Capybara
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Frankly, I did not expect Hermione to willingly bed Draco knowing full well that he was a bona fide Deatheater with the Dark Mark and all - so that was a good plot twist.

There aren\'t as many Hermione turned bad stories in ficdom, notably because it is difficult to keep her fierce force for goodness in character. Nonetheless, she can be ambitious, and if this ambitious is for love, then perhaps there might be a story there in some ways.
person Sarah
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story a lot! I like how Hermione changed sides.

I wish you continue with this story, because there\'s not much D/Hr fic where Hermione changes sides.

BTW, I luurve a virgin Hermione.

D/Hr forever.