rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

*chuckle* I think it\'s cool

its a really good and imagative story. but you need to look in the potter books and learn to spell alot of words. also please run this thru a spell checker, your grammar is really bad.

I'm sorry, I don't want to make you mad, its just hard to read a story when it reads like a junior high school student wrote it....


I would still very much like to see you finish this though... again I dont want to make you mad but let me give you some advice, if and when you get a job and have to write a report, you could loose your job over your bad grammar....

oh my god.... this is such a good story, you have to keep writting, i love it. please update soon !!!!! also just wondering if it is possible that could you post your story on harrypotterfanfiction.com because i read that more often and i know that your story would be great and an excellent addition!!!!

oo its soo good! when is the next one coming out?

It has potential but your spelling is horrid, please please work on it. Not only did you spell several key characters names wrong, but Draco and Hermione were OOC, you need to embellish on the story as well, it sounds like a good plot but so far is not very well written, feel free to e-mail me, I am not flaming you by any means, I am just offering up some constructive criticism

I like your plot so far very interestingI am interested to see where this story goes.. Just one note of critique You need to spell chack a bit.. Maybe get a beta reader as well.