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for The Turning

by gammiepie

person Fiery Slut
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, as usual! Make up sex, you say? Now isn
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that I know were you are going with an aspect of your fic. All I have to say is, I will miss him. He is so tasty with his bad boy self. GGGRRRUUUFFF! Ruff! (sigh)
Write more soon. I am prepared for your choices. (Really, I am.)
person Lessa
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I have to admit I\'m not looking forward to the change in pairing, but I can tell that it\'s going to be thought out and not done ham-handedly. Your feeding my Draco/Hermione addiction while still laying the foundation for the future pairing. You craft a wonderful tale. And even though I am going to lose my fave pair to a pair I don\'t normally read I really don\'t see myself giving up this fine piece of fiction just because of that switch.

Lovely work as always.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5...... I\'ve never been very fond of Draco\'s mother & her attitude is a good portion of the reason why!!! I am surprised that she didn\'t tell them that she had been there the day of their wedding, if nothing else just to use it as a dig towards them!!!

I am curious to see what Hermione will dr her her project, will she take Severus\' idea & go with that?

Looking forward to more!!! Till chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
person Fiery Slut
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!*fans self*
Just why am I having a sudden urge to get married? ^____^
person D^..^^..^< .
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 4........ This was a WONDERFUL chapter!!! You are another wr thr that can write a very HOT piece of smut, very descriptive!!! I also liked the way you worked them into their 1st wedded encounter!!! I do look forward to your next chapter!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Parts 1-3....... I finally got a chance to read this today.... Lof pof potential either way you go!!! I have not yet read the story it stems from, but it is my folder of stories to read*
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Angry, violet eyes?? Is it Elizabeth Taylor? Just kidding.
I look forward to your next chapter. You know, the one with all of the bad stuff happening. :-) Promise I won\'t flame you. Go where your muse leads.
Cheers!
person Fiery Slut
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To whom the violet eyes belong to? Hmmm
person Draco_Fan
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh! Oh no!!!! WHo is it?!?!!? OMG... have u seen Return of the king?! I know this is HP fanfiction but you HAVE to see it! IT\'s soo good! Update soon!! Ilove it!