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i love this story it sucks he dies but it would be great if mione brought him back somehow.

Love it so far! I say keep the kid for now, it might be useful later on. I don't know where you are planning to go with this story but it might be too much to lose her husband and her son... As much as I love the D/Hr pairing, I also like SS/Hr. I sensed a bit of attraction between them in Subdued Fire and also in the beginning of this story. Well, no matter who she ends up with, I'll still be reading!

Though it is depressing to no end that Hermione should lose both Draco and possibly her preemie son, please continue to update. I enjoyed This Subdued Fire and would plead you to continue its sequel.
Keep Writing!
GM

I can't believe you killed draco!!! I just finished reading This Subdued Fire earlier and then I got all excited because there was a sequel..but then..it was like..oh sorry, yeah, I'm going to kill draco, and maybe even their BABY too! You can't kill their baby, hermione would die all over again..she'd have nothing left of draco to remember him by..I hope you come up with a way to bring him back..you could always to the cliche it's all a dream thing..that'd be great and then hermione would have her draco back and all would be happy..

Wait, wait Draco's dead, as in truely dead or as in dead for now and he'll be alive later. Like in a couple of chapters. Cause if he's dead dead then I'm going to cry my little eyes out and that wont be cool.

wait what. there better be a huge twist in the story where draco comes back and is magically healed. and the son too. i dont think i like where this is going. and please update soon, i read the first one all yesterday and i loved it.

* faints*

Malfoy....... *cries*

shes gonna fall for snape isnt she?

Maaaaalllllllllllllllllllllfoyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

damn Lucius

(great sequel to subdued fire. i had to read subdued fire in two days because i needed to sleep in between *laughs* your a brilliant writer)

I think i love this story even more than the first one, if that is even possible. yes, you killed Draco but you did it wonderfully and even though he\'ll be missed there\'s a son now. And good character death and tragedy always makes for an excellent story. not everyone lives happily ever after and this will be the fuel to turn Hermione to killing everyone that should have been killed a long, long time ago but wasn\'t. I love it and I love that you decided to change things around. I adore H/D but I love H/S too. Thanks for writing this and I cant wait to see more :).

It\'s going to be Snape, isn\'t?

Oh, I can\'t wait for the next chapter!! Please keep me updated!!!