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YES YES YES, took ya long enough!!! Herm and Dragon! I\'m glad that you gave something of Draco\'s feelings towards his background. Keep writting i can\'t wait for the next part!

YES!! I'm glad you answered that... hope Young Draco does the same thing... please write more and VERY VERY SOON!! this is one of my favs. Thanks

More please!!!!!!!! I have been on the edge of my seat from the start. Please continue.

Good chapter. I especially like the very ending when Draco told Voldemort he wouldn't bow to him. I had neglected the fact that Lord Voldemort himself is a Mudblood. Can't wait to read more :)

Wonderful, i'm glad that you addressed Voldies claims of ridding the world of "Mudbloods" when he is one... Please write more... again this could be posted on Fanfiction.net and many others would be able to read this wonderful story. Please keep writing.

Yea, I know, it's been a while since I reviewed. *chuckles slightly* seems to me I've had a bit of 'reviewer's block' if there can be such a thing. Anywho, I just wanted to say how impressed I am with your work. You seem to have found the perfect balance of plot and sex, something that can't be said too often about the writers here. No offence to anyone, and I know the requirements of fics on this site, but some of them seem to have something along the lines of: "And then Harry ravaged Hermione," or "In a fit of passion, Draco and Harry fell to the floor and analanal sex." *shudders* So... back to what I was saying, *ahem*. I believe a congradulations is in order. Congradulations on an excellently written piece of fanfiction so far. I expect nothing less of you from now on. :) So until next chapter... or review, depending on which comes first....
This is Dae, signing off.

what you can't stop there?!! Please don't wait another month before updating.... LOVE this story! The idea is organ. PLEASE POST MORE SOON!! As to the other universe thing... does that mean that the olders are here to stay? LOL

Dont stop!! Need more... to bad about the younger folks but i'm sure Brown or Pat can help them out....WANT DRAGON AND HERMIONE TOGETHER!! ps...YOU ROCK

I really like this fic and everything because a few reasons. 1. It's got one of the most original plots for HP I've ever seen. I never read a fic where the older Hp cast goes back to meat their younger ones. and 2. Because its written fairly well.

I think you need more paragraph brake so that its easier to read though. More paragraph brakes good, one big paragraph bad. I don't like the fact that Ginny is with Gryff. I'm no H/G shipper but shoudn't Ginny have been left with Harry. I mean if Ginny's virginity was taken by Gryff then Harry (younger one) would never have gotten to take her virginity. I know that they're the same person but you know that everything the older ones do, effect everything for when they get back to their time.

Because Gryff, Pheonix, Nikki, and Dragon will eventually have to go back to their time. That would leave Hermione alone and not interested in Ron anymore because of Dragon. Harry without Ginny because she will want Gryff. They're literally the same people but not reall because they're different. I don't know if that made sense but there is a pretty big problem with your relationship plot in the fic. So if you think about it Hermione, Harry, and Ron will all be alone because Hermione would want Dragon and Ginny would want Gryff.

You really need to think that over a bit. I know I have. But besides those few flaws its very good. It's got real potential and i hope to see your work improve a bit.

I'm glad I signed up for the update notices. This is progressing nicely. I am hoping that the next installment will see ioneione and Dragon becoming better acquainted ;)