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for In a Lifetime

by Padraigin

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17... What a BEAUTIFUL chapter!!! I LOVE the way you have them sharing so much with each other, not to mention themselves!!! I thought the bit about Neville was a FABULOUS touch!!!

Can\'t wait for MORE!!! Til chapt8, D8, Deb >^..^<
person spaz141
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice and sweet. thanks.
person deblovesdragon
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 was juovelovely. Sexy and lovely.
The Neville joke was just hilarious. Made him stop in his tracks.
Write more soon, mm\'kay.
person IrishRavenX
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
person spaz141
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, just brilliant. I have a smile on my face. Thanks for the update.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16... Well now, isn\'t this a surprising turn of events!!! Poor Severus, don\'t think he knew if he was coming or going!!! I really do LOVE Severus\' attitude!!!

What\'s up with expanding Hogwarts? I am looking forward to finding out!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<
person spaz141
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a feel good chapter. I\'m all tingley(sp). Thanks for the update.
person Kait
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. Simply beautiful.ssedssed Be. Kait x
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15... FABULOUS, WONDERFUL & AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL!!! It\'s about time that Severus was able to forgive himself & what a way to do it!!! To have this be something so powerful that everyone could feel it to me shows how much he deserved to feel forgiveness in himself!!!

I am glad that Molly didn\'t let Remus hold back & am now curious to see what happens when she goes to see Ron?!?

Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^<
person deblovesdragon
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was simply beautiful. He had the power in him to remove the dark mark the whole time. I loved how everyone in the castle felt the peace that Severus felt.
(The sex was kinda hot, by the way.)
Cheers A!