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May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just wandering When you were going to fix your story and re-post it.
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February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good start
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October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Why is that in the second chapter? Is it supposed to be a code for something?
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Why is that in the second chapter? Is it supposed to be a code for something?
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your scenes with the potion and the flu were nice. I like your dialog too.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Despite your story being at least 2 years old, MY ideas for improving it are... just as valid as they always are. lol
You've done a good job and I thank you for your hard work and sharing your talent.
You've done a good job and I thank you for your hard work and sharing your talent.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your writing and will certainly look at what else you've done.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your first chapter and am plowing on ahead.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jees, another good chapter. It took me a bit to get used to your style, (sort of chopy?) but now it feel very comfortable.
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terrific story, really I loved it. I hope you write more such stories.