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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is really really good. please dont leave me hangin here!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, that was so cute! that was a nice little touch. you really nailed a cats attitude. i think if cats could talk, it would be similar to this-maybe a bit more conceited, but overall very similar. nice job on that. i like the story too, its very good
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn, close call there! this is really, really good. i cant wait to read more. i was surprised that i actually liked it, seeing as it doesnt actually have anything to do with harry potter. but it is really good. like i said, i cant wait to read more, so keep it coming! and soon please!
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story!! I love it. I\'ve always wondered what a wizarding school in America would be like. I can\'t wait till you update it again. :) Please update soon.
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Screw both the girls......Lee should turn gay.
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Lee!
Guess who? Your story is coming along really great. I\'m proud that you have finally started writing one of your own. And as for the girls........screw them both! You don\'t need one who loves you, but you can\'t love her back.......and you\'t \'t need one who gives you the cold shoulder and acts like a bitch to you because of her own mixed-up feelings.....ok...this is where the main character is supposed to turn gay...(j/k!)... You have come very far, and i am proud of you! Great work!
Guess who? Your story is coming along really great. I\'m proud that you have finally started writing one of your own. And as for the girls........screw them both! You don\'t need one who loves you, but you can\'t love her back.......and you\'t \'t need one who gives you the cold shoulder and acts like a bitch to you because of her own mixed-up feelings.....ok...this is where the main character is supposed to turn gay...(j/k!)... You have come very far, and i am proud of you! Great work!
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You should thank your beta. Your writing is unpolished and difficult to read, your beta did an amazing job making it flow. He/She deserves a mention, more than the little \"this is fixed. I hope\" you gave.
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a very average story, filled with mistakes. Not bad for a first attempt, though. I strongly suggest that you find yourself a beta-reader.
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December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is getting better and better - your plot is swirling - take me with you!!!!
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I\'m loving your story still - can\'t be long online cos I\'m not on my own pc...but you\'re doing great! Kait xx