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sex drugs and rock and roll, party on dude.

A nice turn of events, and a pretty good begining.
BUT, please get a beta or use Word to check grammar and spelling - I wouldn\'t coment on little mistakes, but sometimes it\'s impossible to figure out what they are saying. And you tend to mix Draco and Harry\'s actions. (The Sorting Hat is an \"it\" not a \"he\").

I complain not because I\'m nasty or want to offend you - I just really would like to know clearly what Hary and Draco are doing and saying, because I liked the story.

Please consider asking a beta reader for assistance with your writing. There are forums at http://www.fictionalley.org/fictionalleypark/forums/forumdisplay.php?s=&forum8 a8 and also a listing of volunteers at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/glassesreflect/database

Beta readers can be a valuable resource.

Dina

very good. please write more.

This fic is kinda fun. Dominant Harry is so rare in fanfic that It\'s quite jarring when I find a fic with it. I really want to see where you\'re going with the story. Please keep it coming (or cumming as it were. LOL!)

i NEED A CHAPTER 2, THIS IS A GREAT story. Draco/harry/snape is a great combination. Draco is not a sex slave, he is Harrys right hand man with benifits. Also he has healed Harry a lot. Draco needs to take snape as well. Keep going with this, it is worth it..