rate_review Reviews

That was a wonderful action packed story with pacd drd drama. It held my attention all afternoon. I really felt for poor Nathan, you showed his sense of desperation perfectly in fact all the characterisations and motivations worked like a charm. All in all a gripping tale and the perfect way to spend an afternoon.

Puzzles here I come!


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Chapter 23: Ahhhhh! So that\'s why Ron attacked Severus, why he was so weird, so mean with Hermione. I\'m relieved (to a certain point, poor Ron!), because all of this was so unlike him!

Chapter 13: She tastes \"like petals blended with wine and sea salt... and honey\"! Pleaaase! (rolling eyes). It spoiled the pleasure... too sugary for



Chapter 20: A pensieve for baby thoughts! I loved the idea, soooo sweet! (I guess I like sweeties from time to time...).

Anyway, still enjoying your story very much!

Chapter 36: Well, that was a hectic chapter! Perfect timing, might I say...

I\'ve just discovered your fic, and I\'m completely taken by it. I\'ve read until chapter 5, and it\'s saddest and saddest. :

You must have been riding the Hogwarts Express! A masterful tour de force, a ripping good story, superbly written, and I\'m running out of adjectives. Also stayed up way too late to read it all. Thank you forever.

Loved this story. Really hard to follow at first, but wary *ry *very* glad to see it got explained in later chapters. : ) I was *so* upset at Ron, and relieved to discover he\'d been under a curse. ::whew:: Anyways, you drew me into your story making me anxious to know what the bloody heck was going on. LOL You also did a great job of tying it up, so there were no dangling ends that left me growling at the computer screen. ::laughs::

Anyhoo, I\'m off to bed. I\'m saving the sequel until tomorrow, and I\'m definitely looking forward to it.


Kiri

This is a splendid story! I read it from beginning to end -- I realised that if I didn\'t I\'d never understand your next story! You did a beautiful job with the difficult plot twists and the great characterisations. You got Hagrid perfectly (he\'s always been a favourite of mine) and a new twist on McGonagall. Blessed be! Dame Niamh

Excellent story, I love how you had a very intricate plot that got revealed bit by bit but always seemed to work. My only nitpicky thing would be that the scene where Crookshanks is killed and Severus admits his feelings doesn\'t quite ring true with me - even under the circumstances it seemed very abrupt, we\'re not given any evidence that he\'d had feelings develop. But other than that I *really, really* enjoyed the story and look forward to reading the sequel. I\'m glad it wasn\'t Ron\'s fault that he turned into Evil!Ron, it seems so many stories make him evil and I really just don\'t see him that way. And I loved how Millie dealt with the insane Pansy issue, that was hilarious!

Jesus, you\'re smart....that\'s pretty freaky, you had me on the edge of my seat all day. I\'m going to wait until your sequel is finished, because I cannot bear to start reading a fiction that will not be finished. I hope you do finish it.

i love it,your keeping me in suspence.