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for The Protector

by muteandtremorless

person Sneere
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am impressed.
That was numbing to read. You had Draco and Harry together, but the story went on even after he died. Well after he died in fact.
My body was numb and so was my mind but my subconcuiose was abuzz. Still is.
And in the end, Draco didn\'t kill the mutant-mudblood known as Voldamort. You don\'t see a lot of stories like that in the long run.
Wow!...Just...WOW!
person Sneere
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I forgot one thing. You weren\'t entirly clear on why Draco couldn\'t die. Or were you just going to leave that up to the reader to figure out? Was chapter seven the last one? Seemed like it, but you know you didn\'t have a TBC or a Fin or anything.
person ABC
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was ore than just \'one thing\'...
person Anon
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. It\'s almost hard to imagine how someone\'s life could get progressively worse and worse to even such unthinkable depths. Intense
person Gia
schedule December 30, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Gawd.. Sneed.. ::shudders:: that name makes my skin crawl, he's horrible!! But.. I like it.. how freaky is that? ~_^ Life isn't all about good things and all that, and you state that frankly.. no exaggerating and no belittling about it. Okay.. and I'm starting to ramble on and on.. ::sweatdrop:: I await your next chapter! ^-^
person S. Wing
schedule December 27, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was great......just great.....love it!! Write more like this!
person Gia
schedule December 23, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Lol.. forgot all about reviewing! -_-.. sorry bout' that, but GAWD!! Harry died?!?! NOOO!!! And Draco, ouch.. life ain't getting easier for him, is it? I love how you detailed this though, describing the emotions and all, lovely! I await your next chapter!
person Sun-chan
schedule December 23, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... What an absolutly angsty masterpice. I love all of it. You write poor tortured Draco so well. It just amazes me... I don't know what else to say.