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for A Gift Returned

by Veresna

person maranna
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do like the idea of Snape as a vampire!!! I would guess most HP readers wonder sometimes that he might be. I know I have! Please continue....
person Scarlet
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
no! that can\'t be the end!
person ta2danyu
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please, may I have some more? (in an Oliver Twist voice)
person Kiristeen
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo! Yummy. I have a weak spot for vampires and necks. I was adoring this story anyway, then you threw in that little surprise he ehe end. Now I\'m all tingly! : )!! Divine ending.

Kiri
person Norah
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, as per usual. Absolutely excellent for your first fanfic, though I do love your snarky!Severus much better. You\'ve got talent and you use it well.
person rumours03
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thankee. How beautiful a gift to return to dear Prof. Snape. Loved the last line of the first chapter. Will giggle over for a while.
:-)
~ R.
person mariteri
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More! Write more! Please?
person SnapeyBears
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you can be like so kewl and do another chapter in this, the ending was quite hot.
person TeaRoses
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great ending! And an excellent story.
person -E-
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Really well written. A little \'rushed\' to reveal the most secret secret, but as HG couldn\'t possibly, in Gryffindor Honor, refrain from confessing \'just one more thing\' it works. And, yes, it could use a sequel if you can find enough motivation(reason) to carry the obvious and absolutely delightful relationship to a fruition I (and many other readers, too, I\'m sure) would love to read. You have the grasp of plotting fiction and finding (justifying) the purpose of a sequel--the story of Hogwart\'s and students and teachers, etc. and their goings-on--to \'frame\' the absolutely delicious beginnings of one of the better developing romances would give me nightmares. (I\'m certain you could do it as I would be shivering in my boots still.) I will be looking for this and will be reading anything you write. You are good.