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for Legally Binding

by Darkwriter

person gsnape
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
of the challenge responses I like this one the best
keep going
person nesscafe
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH BOY!!! Harry\'s in trouble now! I can hear them now! I know this looks bad, but.... Hehe! Reckon Snapes gonna be happy about Potter being sprawled across his baby sister! LOL! I doubt it!
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolute amazing! I would have never thought of Harry being a panther in his animagus form-- I didn\'t think that he would have such an extreme animagus form at all. But it was amazing and I was really into the story. I felt like I was right there! I hope that you update soon because this is one of the best stories I\'ve read on this site. I was actually dissapointed when the last chapter, chapter 6, came to an end because I wanted to keep going! You\'re a good writer. ^_^

Ciao ^_^
person Kiristeen
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eeep! and again Eeep! LOL Can\'t wait for more. : )~


Kiri
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6....... This was VERY GOOD!!! I LOVE that Crookshank\'s got to Lucius, couldn\'t have happened to a nicer jerk!!!

SO, what\'s up with Harry, is his animal side leading him to want Sarin Snape? Wouldn\'t that be interesting & I bet Severus would just LOVE to havery Pry Potter as an in-law;-)

HAPPY HOLIDAYS, Deb >^..^<
person Kiristeen
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooo! Harry court case was great! Loved his line of reasoning. I\'m thoroughly ticked off at snape, though. Harry can\'t do anything right, no matter which angle he talks from. lol Course, I\'m not too happy with the court case of Hermione\'s, ye gads, I\'d have been *livid* in her place. Kudos to her for managing to keep her mouth shut. I\'m not sure I could have. lolol

I can\'t wait to see more. I\'d like to see her elope out from under their noses. ::snickers:: I mean, the day she turns 18, if she got married on her own, I don\'t *think* they could over turn it, as long as the other person involved was inline with the law, ie a pureblood. That\'d be a hoot to watch them having hysterics because of it. lolol

Ah well, I look forward to seeing where you go with this and how things turn out.

Kiri
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5..... I really feel bad for Hermione, having to have the court choose for her!!! Harry was GREAT in there & said all the right things!!!

I am glad that Severus knows about the abuse that Harry got from his \'family\'. It allowed him to see beyond the Harry that he had seen at school!!! I also like that he noticed how his sister was looking at him... could we be in for a double Snape wedding*
person Fairlight
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. ITs one of the better responses to the Marrigae law Challange that I have seen. I hope you pots agian soon.

Fairlight
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you have Harry affected by this stupid law. The whole Weasley family would need to marry muggleborns or half bloods too. Heck, it would effect EVERY witch and wizard.
Not looking forward to all of the owl post that Harry will receive. It should be more than Santa Claus gets.
Keep writing more soon. And more Severus/Hermone interaction soon please!

Happy Holidays!
person Kiristeen
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL, died laughing when Harry announced he would have to be part of the new law. ::snickers:: Not the smartest t he\ he\'s ever done. I look forward to seeing where you take this story.

Kiristeen