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for Legally Binding

by Darkwriter

person Demosthenes
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!! this is by FAR the BEST responce to that particular challenge i have EVER READ! this is a MASTER PIECE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!! i will write you every fricken day if i have to (if you have noticed i am very tired of good authors never finishing stories!!!)

UPDATE!
person Silvermoon
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading all the different Marriage Law storys and your plot seems to be one of the best yet. Keep up with the great work.
person Merrideth
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!

MERRIDETH
person Lorena Snape
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Already gave you my review for everything up to this point, but I just wanted to add this:

Please update! Please, pretty please??


~ LS :-)

person hpz26
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have my interest, please continue. Thanks for writing!
person lee marker
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you are going aboult doing this fanfic. that you have harry under the law to is very cool. I just can\'t what to see how it goews.
person Lorena Snape
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far. I love the fact that you\'ve included Harry in being subject to this law. That really makes sense to me - I think that logically (and genetically), any witch or wizard with muggle ancestry at much as 3 generations back would qualify, not just direct Muggleborns. As for Snape\'s sister, I\'m usually not one for original characters, but so far she seems ok. I look forward to reading more of this. If you have an update list, please feel free to add me.

~ Lorena
person Stratyllis
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is getting juicy! I love it.
person spaz141
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting take on the challenge. Snaps a s a sister, never thought of that. I\'m impressed. thanks.
person Morrigan
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you are doing with this story.. Especially the way Harry
and Hermione are responding to the situation they are in. Harry\'s animagus
form is unique... when you mentioned he was crouched low, I pictured a
snake.. I look forward to reading your twist on the Marriage debacle and
how the two plan avoiding the worst evils.. It would be interesting to see
who has petitioned for both.. perhaps Rita Skeeter or divination professor could be
petitioners... It would be interesting also to see who the professors think Harry\'s
ideal woman would be. I also look forward to seeing Hermione coming up with
a cunning plan...perhaps she could try to influence the court appointed guardians
or blackmail them... after all her life is at stake.