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for Legally Binding

by Darkwriter

person Kate McGuire
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please update soon. I really like Sarin. And a panther as Harry\'s animagus form. Curious though, black mutatations (panther) shows up in several species of big cats (puma, lepard, jaguar and maybe some others). Which one is he?
person gsnape
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue this is one of the better responses to the challenge
person Susan
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really wish that you would continue this story. It was so well written. While I think many of the challenge stories are great, most have ss/hg married very quickly. Your story draws the suspense out and makes it feel fresher. Please update and let us all know how this ends..m sum sure that you are busy with classes, so do not feel pressure. Thanks for a great story!
person sakhara291
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit.
person tubin
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your ideas are interesting, but you need to work on grammar and spelling. Spell-checkers do not catch it when your mis-spelling or typo ends up making a word, as when you typed \"whole\" instead of \"hole\". Such substitutions are quite distracting.

Keep writing; when your syntax catches up with your imagination, you are going to be a fabulous author!
person Demosthenes
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Demosthenes
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHY ARE YOU NOT UPDATING?!?!?!?! WHY?
person Lorena Snape
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here I am again... begging for an update. Will you take a bribe perhaps? Homemade sugar cookies? Fudge? (the edible kind, not Cornelius)... I have to tell you, my homemade fudge kicks ass you know...

;-)

person Demosthenes
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!! ready...GO! this is absolutly cruel and i wont stand for it
person Demosthenes
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! keep writing please!!!!