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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent plot complications. Good characterization.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story so far, but there are alot of spelling and grammar errors. Also, animagi have full control of their animal form whether they kill in it or not, it is werewolves who don\'t unless under Wolfsbane. Just letting you know. I do enjoy your plot though.
elementaldeity
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice job with this variation. cha characterization so far.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least the marraige law didn\'t say people had to get married at any specific time, just that when they did get married it had to be to someone they were\'n\'t related to. sorta.
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dagny T. - You\'re quite welcome. *grin* I only hope that Demosthenes, and others who \'review\' in like manner, will consider it as well...
~ LS
~ LS
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome so far! please continue!!!
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, hope con continue.
oh, and-
(in a sarcastic drawl worthy of Snape) thanks for the lecture Lorena.
oh, and-
(in a sarcastic drawl worthy of Snape) thanks for the lecture Lorena.
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still checking back, hoping for an update. *sigh*
This is one of the more unique responses to this challenge, and is very good. I really hope you continue with it.
~ LS
This is one of the more unique responses to this challenge, and is very good. I really hope you continue with it.
~ LS
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just read through the other reveiws here, and would like to apologise for asking you to update. I will try to be more patient, and when you do update, I\'m sure it will be worth the wait.
Now - to you other reviewers who are bitching for an update: Lay off. Encouraging a writer is one thing, nagging is another. True, I have asked for updates too, because I think this is a really unique and well-written fic, and it would be a shame to see it abandoned. But some reviewers (no need to name names) are being rude, and outright badgering the author. Do you actually think that will help get you a chapter faster? It won\'t. If anything, you risk pissing the author off. We readers have no idea what is going on in the personal lives of these authors, or what constraints they are under. No amount of either bitching or begging will change that. An author should not feel as though their fic is a burden, and they have to update because people are expecting it. An author will appreciate encouragement far more...
~ LS
Now - to you other reviewers who are bitching for an update: Lay off. Encouraging a writer is one thing, nagging is another. True, I have asked for updates too, because I think this is a really unique and well-written fic, and it would be a shame to see it abandoned. But some reviewers (no need to name names) are being rude, and outright badgering the author. Do you actually think that will help get you a chapter faster? It won\'t. If anything, you risk pissing the author off. We readers have no idea what is going on in the personal lives of these authors, or what constraints they are under. No amount of either bitching or begging will change that. An author should not feel as though their fic is a burden, and they have to update because people are expecting it. An author will appreciate encouragement far more...
~ LS
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m a recent HP fanfic fan. I have been reading SS/HG ship for rough mon month, and I must say
that this particular fic is a lot better than those others with the marriage law. I do applaud your
use of words and sentences... they really make the story so intriguing and realistic.
Mmmm... I think I like your idea of a female Snape, and absolutely love your idea of Harry Potter\'s
animagus form being the one to kill Voldemort.. since honestly the boy doesn\'t seem so capable in
my own honest opinion.
You\'re making me wonder if Severus would bid for Hermione though... he being a Snape and rumored
to be of an older Pureblood family than Malfoy.
that this particular fic is a lot better than those others with the marriage law. I do applaud your
use of words and sentences... they really make the story so intriguing and realistic.
Mmmm... I think I like your idea of a female Snape, and absolutely love your idea of Harry Potter\'s
animagus form being the one to kill Voldemort.. since honestly the boy doesn\'t seem so capable in
my own honest opinion.
You\'re making me wonder if Severus would bid for Hermione though... he being a Snape and rumored
to be of an older Pureblood family than Malfoy.