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for Legally Binding

by Darkwriter

person laceyweasley
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t seen an update in awhile. I\'m not pushing I know your son was ill. I hope everything went ok and that you are having fun playing with him. Your fans haven\'t forgotten you.
person laceyweasley
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I see you haven\'t posted in a little while. Please don\'t think I am badgering you. The surgery of a child is a serious thing. I hope that all is well with you and him.

This story has gotten under my skin. I lost the story, couldn\'t remember the author and searched for several weeks before I finally posted a request on WIKTT and Lorena Snape helped me find it. You\'re an excellent writer and you took an idea that is thought provoking (if a litte abused) and turned it into a work of art. You have put more twists in your chapters than most authors can deal with and yet the flow of the story is unmistakable easy to read and entertaining.

I wish you and your family the best. I\'ll be around when you update!
person Alison of the Faeries
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So cool. A great take on this challenge!
person laceyweasley
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you once again!

I just re-read your story with your new chapter. It deserved a re-read. You have so many wonderful plots set up I can\'t wait to see how they start to resolve themselves.

God Bless to you and your son!
person Ezmerelda
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back, hope everything goes well for you and your son, thanks for writing! ~\"~
person Susann
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey just read your story! The Snape/Hermione thing still is not really my favorite but I can live with it. But I would hate for Harry to end up with Sarin she is older than he is by 8 years for heavens sake, thats just plain wrong! Otherwise I like the story and look forward for an update.
person Lyonessheart
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, just don\'t let Harry end up with Sarin that\'s just wrong! She is what 25? And he just turned 17 I might be old fashioned but I still think that is just plain wrong to have him with someone 8 years his senior, and with Hermione that is not much better if you actually turn this into a HG/SS Story. Sorry if you think thats bitchy but that is my opinion. Otherwise I think the story is very well written.
person liquidscissors
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sarin? As in Sarin gas? ;)
person Village Mystic
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story has interesting dimensions to it so far. The physical abuse aspect is very interesting and important in the psyogicogical dynamic and I hope you follow up on it some more.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am hoping that all is well after your son