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by Elentari

person s
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Kris
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH???!?!?!?!?!!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!?!? o.O *stares*.... *falls over dead*
person ObscurusLupus
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story very much....I like that u mentioned Brazil in the 2nd chap :) lol. But the the stroy is great :D
person ObscurusKaida
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your Snape...btw r u from Curitiba? I am...never seen it in a stpry before so, u know I was just wondering
person GwenP
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So happy that you are writing again!
person Zeedrippyvessel
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you have not abandoned this...
person Moyra
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Elentari
Another absorbing idea for an SS/HG fanfic
person moony_reader
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Merciful heavens!! This story is absolutely AMAZING! Please tell me that you are going to go on with this plot? I like this story for so many reasons. Firstly, Hermione as an Unspeakable; I don\'t know why anyone hasn\'t thought of it before. Heavens knows she\'s smart and brave enough to be a spy... and she\'s also willing to forgo the recognition (as can be seen with everyone of the Trio\'s adventures). Secondly, I like the dynamic between Snape and Hermione. You\'re never obvious when you\'re writing the scenes between them. It\'s like they\'re speaking their own language and you don\'t realize what\'s happened until you get five sentences ahead. And lastly, I like this this is a story about Hermione. It\'s not really ve sve story about her and Snape. It\'s just about her life and her development as a person. I especially loved the chapters when she ran away from Snape. She had fun and experienced new things and returned full of confidence and with an understanding of things, whereas before she (and thus, the readers) was like a confused little child. I really love this story, but I can see it being really long cause of all of the elements going on. Please keep writing this!
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do continue!
person Zee
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I was reading this at ffnet when I started boycotting it (the website, not your fic)... yeah yeah, I got \"Zee Boot\" from them... but I kept coming back to read this. I was heartbroken when the link was no longer there and this fic was removed. I don\'t know if you removed it or if they did, but now... I DON\"T GIVE A RAT\"S ASS!!!!! I found it!!! YAY ME!

I love this! Your Snape is wonderfully snarky, Hermoine is wonderfully independent and I for one love this. Please update soon!!!

***Waves to Bibi*** Told you Snape was a hottie!