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LOL Draco is a crafty bastard, isn\'t he? Hehe. I love it! Can\'t wait to see the next installment. ;) I love this story. :)

Chapter 12... I do so hope that 13 will be a lucky # for Hermione!!! Will Hermione be having another talk with Sevrus about all that has happened?!? Will she tell Draco about the baby?!? Can\'t wait to see what her choice of payback for Pansy is!!! Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<

Loved the chapter!!:) Draco\'s bad karma needs to come back 10x as bad as what he\'s doing to her now. I hope he finds out she was pregnant with his baby when he did that to her, so that maybe he would feel like an ass. Will he ever find out? With all the horrible things that haappeappened to her, shouldn\'t she have some kind of pend up rage that\'s about to become unleashed or some kind of mental breakdown? I justl tel terrible for the poor girl. My favorite part in this chapter was when she hexed him at the end. But I think he deserved more than that:) I can\'t wait to read more. Please update soon:)

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Great chapter just wow, didnt really move the story along as much but still very needed.

you would think hermione would want to get even with pansy too, and her revenge was just blah atleast Draco put some thought into it instead of just hexing her. But thats why Draco is so good at being mean, so very methotical.

Man, that was wicked! That\'s a damn shame. :( What is going to happen when Draco realizes that he tortured Hermione while pregnant with his child? I thatthat he won\'t be so happy about that, hm? Oh well, interesting read. Please update soon! BTW, have you seen what Pansy looks like from the movies? I kind of pictured her like that, except the movie version, she doesn\'t look mean enough, you know? In fact, Hermione could easily kick her ass! LOL

I want her to hex Malfoy from here to oblivion...screw him!! NOT literelly of course. Please update.

Holy Crap! Draco really means war!
Thanks for the warning, although I didn\'t heed it - hopefully no nightmares about owls.
Although I will have bad dreams about Hermiones experience at the clinic - how terrible.
Just waiting for the whole truth to come out and have it throw everything topsy-turvy. Great story & look forward to reading your next update.

Chapter 11... Things aren\'t looking so good for Hermione!!! I take it that Draco doesn\'t know by the way he was talking to Severus, did he not hear the whole conversation?!?

I am looking forward to seeing what Draco wants from Pansy as well as seeing what Hermione will do!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<

This story is really good. The the different PoVs from Draco and Hermione are also great. Your Draco is well written and I think his actions and thoughts are in character. But your Hermione is rather out of character, but that suits the story just fine. It\'s really sad that Draco doesn\'t know she is pregnant, now he is going to be all mean to her, while she has to figure out what to do about her situation. I also like that she is thinking about an abortion first, a least that\'s what I figured she wants to do in Hogsmeade. There are just too many fics out there where young girls embrace the idea of being pregnant way too fast.

Waiting for another great chapter,
Lorelei