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by gammiepie

person Lessa
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WooooHooo you updated!! *doing happy dance*

Seriously was quite impressed that Draco was actually feeling pinpricks of guilt over his behavior and YEAH for Hermione for making him propose for real. I think she let him off easy on the bended knee bit but it was most enjoyable to see him in that position and mean it. I really hope your next chapter has her take on his \'confession\'. I can only guess what was going through her mind during it.

Until the next time!

Lessa
person Kay
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredible story! I love it! Keep up the good work!
person Fiery Slut
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, BM! It
person Ning
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Very in character. *clap clap* And I think you like the fact for Hermione and Draco to get married. Not bad. ;]
person Arissa
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice chapter. The Grangers vs Narcissa Malfoy was priceless *lol* And my Draco is really a Slytherin old Salazar would be proud of, the trick with the newspapers was really evil *g*
The situatuion certainly brings out the cruel side of Hermione
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13... I was hoping that now that Draco knows Hermione would allow him to be a part of everything:( I am so curious to find out how he intends to \'rectify\' things!!!

I do like the way that you let people find out that she is pregnant!!! Minerva\'s reason for her to be in the hospital wing is very believable!!! At least there are only a few people that know, BUT..... Is that what Draco is going to do?!? Will he tell everyone that she is pregnant with his child & make it impossible for her to get away to do what she wants?!?

I do hope that they will be able to work everything out in a good way!!! They have already spent too much time trying to be hurtful to each other!!! Can\'t wait for MORE!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<
person Miki
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omigod! This ust ust getting better and better. What will Malfoy do? Will Hermione keep the baby? Will they finish their Newts? (Said in radio announcer voice).

Update ASAP!!!
person Arissa
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story!Bloody shame it took me so long to find it. But better late then never.;)

Can
person deedee
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, you updated:) I\'m so happy he finally found out about the pregnancy and that he feels guilty, but I don\'t remember him actually saying sorry to her. I liked how you had him compare his mating choice to a lobster\'s. I just loved this chapter. Will there be more smut on the way for the two of them? I\'m really rooting for Hermione to have the upper hand here, because so far it seems that Draco\'s not experiencing nearly enough misery and worry compared to Hermione. Poor Hermione\'s been worried about what to do with the pregnancy and dealing with morning sickness (which doesn\'t even have to happen in the morning). I would just like to see him pay for the consquences too.
I really enjoy Snape\'s part in this fic. He\'s seems to be the sarcastic voice of reason. lol:) I can\'t wait to read more.
person Fiery Slut
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew!*wipes sweat*

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