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for Unrequited

by gammiepie

person betty
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Admittadly, when I started reading I liked having just Draco\'s pov. Then Hermione\'s thoughts came in and I hated it. Then she got pregnant and I hated it more. But as the love story began to progress after marriage...let\'s just say my hatred sort of vanished. And people say I\'m malicious.
person deedee
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY, you updated!! :)

I\'m so very happy he didn\'t give up and go to sleep just because he couldn\'t unlock her door. If he didn\'t try,
he wouldn\'t have gotten his shagging reward in the morning :) Good boy :P
With Narcissa being so overly protective (I want to say bitchie, but that does really fit either.), I predict it could bring the happy couple closer together; only if Draco becomes annoyed by his mother.
Love the story, please update soon
person Meredith
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Keep up the good work.
person thelorelei
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is ABSOLUTELY adorable and I love your writing style LOVE IT! I can\'t wait to read more...
person Raffy
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was definitely worth the long wait, BM! Wow, just WOW!
Sex was fabulous (as always) but I thought the whole chappie was simply adorable! I
person maber
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yay, I simply adore this story...good smut and some good sweetness too!!
person Emma
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really really adore this story! I\'m all for Hermione and Draco fics and this is definitely top on the list of the MANY I\'ve read. Please update more soon! I can\'t wait to see how things turn out between the two in the end.
person Kiki Malfoy
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I rather like this fic. It definitely does not waver is showing Draco\'s malicious side like some do. Keep up the good work...
person eve/roarke
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Was surfing Aff trying to find a new story when I came to yours, Its Brilliant. I love the way they came together, also like Hermione\'s inte
reaction to Snape. You have not updated since October, hope your not giving up on this fanfic.
I\'ll be watching out for a update, seeing has it\'s Christmas perhaps a new chapter prezzie for your readers?
person slytherinswn
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic story. Can\'t wait for more