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for Unrequited

by gammiepie

person Fiery Slut *winks*
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For ch 21:

Awww
person Narcissa Black
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DumbandDumberdore. Love it.
person Elayne
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love how you kept the characters true to themselves, Draco being all arrogant and snobby, and Hermione being.... well how she is. As a rule, I don\'t really like either of them, but your story is starting to win me over. :) I think it is extremely well written. Probably one of the best fanfics I\'ve ever read. Please keep the chapters coming!
person Bambu
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I like the fact that despite the continuing see-saw of their relationship, which is understandable given their history, background and families, you have shown that at some point one simply has to choose to forgive/forget and compromise. Hermione has done that very thing, even still not being terribly happy with her pregnancy... but it\'s growing on her (pun intended). I am most eager to see the holidays at Malfoy Manor. You have a perfect opportunity for Draco to show his evolving maturity and broader perspective (even though he occasionally ::cough:: resents it).
person sparkle85
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I\'m so very glad to see you\'ve updated! I really enjoy this fic, love it!!! Please update soon!
person Yoshima
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i\'ll be damned finsish it for christ sake. its a bloody wonderful read it is. and i enjoy it quite much. ^-^
person deedee
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let the fluff begin :)
They\'re become so domesticated. hee hee
It\'s cute though
person Meredith
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it coming!
person AshleyZ
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update. Sweet, but not too sweet. I really really enjoy this fic, but I\'m not above waiting if it\'s going to be this good. :)
person Bambu
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve fallen behind in my chapters so I got to read three at once, which was a huge treat. I think that you\'re quite clever in terms of isolating Hermione and Draco from the other students. I\'m not referring to merely the separation of living quarters, which is the physical separation, but also the fact that they are essentially being ostracized by their Housemates. It is a beautiful distinction between juvenalia and maturity, and with the impending birth of a child, maturity needs to prevail. You\'ve crafted it in such a way that maturity is beginning to do just that, along with the growth of feelings between the two. As their defensive mechanisms slowly erode between them, the natural attraction has a chance to grow into something more. It\'s always a pleasure to read your chapters.