rate_review Reviews

Wow. This is just great. I sat down and read the whole story in one day.

I congratulate you for writing such an accurate, GREAT D/Hr. The characters are written in a way that you could expect them too, and in not one way OOC. I especially
-love- how you don\'t make them suddenly Super!God Draco and Super!Vixen Hermione. They are attractive and you kept that, while still keeping them -real-. That was just great.

I love this, you must update! In my few years of reading fanfic (I don\'t read or write on here, I\'m over at ffnet), I don\'t think I\'ve read such a great and believable fic. No cliche parts whatsoever. Wow, this deserves an award.

I\'ll be sure to tell my friends about this one.

Much luck, xthais

You write slower than JK Rowling herself! And I\'m telling you, if this story wasn\'t so damn good, I would....well anyways, don\'t take so long for the next chapter. It\'s mean.

It\'s so nice to see an update of this story. Even as they begin to sand the rough surfaces off their volatile relationship, there are still a few rough patches. But it seems that the contented times are working their own magic, and I hope they have begun to build a solid foundation before Narcissa\'s further machinations attempt to tear them apart. I think Narcissa\'s quite vicious in this...

ACK! You updated and I missed it... thank TPTB that I thought to re-read the whole thing after \'Burning Eyes.\' Narcissa is deliciously vicious and I\'m so pleased that you had her earliest comeuppance be at Draco\'s hands. It works so well that way. The peace that Draco and Hermione find while in the nursery is quite lovely... it\'s really charming how the two of them, when alone, can be so at ease with each other. It seems that their issues really stem from what happens when the rest of the world intrudes. All in all, this was a terrific update.

This is such a great story. It has all the aspects that I enjoy in a Draco/Hermione pairing. I love that eventhough they have been forced into the situation, they are slowly falling in love and you can tell that they will stay together well after the baby is born. I would love to see more of possessive Draco, it is a character trait that suits him well. I have to admit that I am infuriated at Harry and Ron at not being the supportive friends that they claim to be. What happened to that Gryffindor loyalty? I know that they want the best for Hermione, but what about what she wants? Will you be updating this anytime soon? I would love to see how this one ends.

AWWWW

I adore this story!!!!

Loving it! Very well written and intriguing.

Awesome, this chapter was beautiful! Love the ending of the chapter! Please continue!

I\'m loving \"Unrequited\" so much! It\'s really hot, but manages to have more substance than any romance novel. The thoughts are consistent to the characters and the world is just as if JK had written it herself. The story only currently goes up to Chapter 23 so I can\'t wait to read the rest!

Wow, what a fast update. Thank you!