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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo Hermione! The gal has mad spunk. Great hookup with Draco and fab story.
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6.... Very Good!!! Hermione got to kill 2 birds with one stone, getting back at Ron & getting back the controling interest with Draco!!! I LOVE how she shut him down, but I\'m sure she left him wanting much more!!!
HAPPY HOLIDAYS, Deb >^..^<
HAPPY HOLIDAYS, Deb >^..^<
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the warmiormione
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i\'m hard
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Once again, a marvelous and beautiful story. t jot job-I like seeing Hermione strong and firey and sure of herself!
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
chap 4:
Girls do tend to act aggressively to discourage guys.
But what Hermione doesn
Girls do tend to act aggressively to discourage guys.
But what Hermione doesn
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another QUICK update!!! I really LOVED this, both thinking along the same lines, wanting to get over on the other..... just wait til they actually get together!!! I thought it was really nice that they both had the idea to do something to the other\'s room.... hoping they will think about it & end up meeting half way between their rooms!!! Can\'t wait for MORE!!! Deb >^..^<
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying this story!
Just one thing is bothering me. You switch from present tense to past tense frequently, and it can get a little confusing. Do you have a beta for your fic? If not, I\'d be more than happy to scan through it for you.
Anyway, this is becoming a very, very interesting fic and I can\'t wait see where you\'ll take it. :)
Just one thing is bothering me. You switch from present tense to past tense frequently, and it can get a little confusing. Do you have a beta for your fic? If not, I\'d be more than happy to scan through it for you.
Anyway, this is becoming a very, very interesting fic and I can\'t wait see where you\'ll take it. :)
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Omg... This story is great. Update soon! This story is so believable it\'s UNBELIEVABLE! Hehe... Update soon! I love it!!!
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update first of alSecoSecond... I had to start giggling when I read the first paragraph of ch.4. I could just seem him doing the mental sinster chuckle/hand wring thing so typical of cartoon villians... LOL what an imagine. And I loved Draco\'s bafflement of Hermione taking charge there. Knocked him back for a moment or two didn\'t it? ;)
A very long squeal of approval for Ms.Brainy at the beginning of the chapter. I so adore it when Hermione is not a mouse. And the chapter ending was just perfect. Their own sneakyness backfiring kinda sorta looks like it\'s going to take them in a direction neither of them has planned on.
Excellent chapters just excellent.
A very long squeal of approval for Ms.Brainy at the beginning of the chapter. I so adore it when Hermione is not a mouse. And the chapter ending was just perfect. Their own sneakyness backfiring kinda sorta looks like it\'s going to take them in a direction neither of them has planned on.
Excellent chapters just excellent.