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by gammiepie

person CrystallineLily
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey....me again! I can\'t believe you\'ve posted so much in the time that i haven\'t checked my e-mail...^^;;. Sorry, but I\'ll definitely be following up on this fic of yours! Keep e-mailing me?? Thanks!

~C Lily~
person EditorDee
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I must have more! That was fabulous! I was laughing so hard. I couldn\'t help it. You\'ve got an amazing talent for writing. Keep it up. I like this one, it\'s moreplayful than This Subdued Fire. Which I loved by the way, but this story is fun, just fun. It\'s got feelings, emotions, yes, but it\'s more playful and more like a , wh, which is what they are playing. Keep writing, and we expect a cha chapter soon!

~Dee
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahahaa
person hinkypunk08
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, what a delicious chapter! I really like the alternating POVs and the D/Hr interactions in this fic. And I\'m to learn that this is going to be around 20 chapters. Yay!
person Fiery Slut
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, what can I say? Hermione got a taste of her own medicine!
I know how it feels to be left hanging like that, but she deserved it! hehe
person deedee
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love a WAR, especially between Draco and Hermione:) That boy\'s got will power. I would be scared if I was him. Hermione\'s got the best ideas when it comes to retaliation. Write more:)
person PassionedTemptress
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this fic!! I\'ve read all of your other ones, and I\'ve gotta say, I\'m looking forward to each and every smut-filled chapter of this story as much as I was looking forward to the other ones. It sounds like it\'s going to be great. You set up an excellent plot! Cat and mouse games-so funny and entertaining...especially when it\'s Hermione and the sexiest beast of all, Draco (*rawr*). Hope you update soon!
person JennaSlytherin
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you had better hurry up witat cat chappy missy!!!! :)

I love this!!!
person Jules
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! I really like hearing a lot of Draco\'s thought\'s. Interesting that they both had observed the other so much that they knew each others likes & dislikes.
The banter between them is fast and funny.
I look forward to reading more.

Jules

PS I do wonder what the length of this \"ficlet will be\" as TSF was what 1001 chapters, right? ;)
person Draco_Fan
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I love it! Update soon!

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