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by gammiepie

person FuMan Skeeto
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haha! i really love the way you wrote your 9th chapter!!!... did she have four orgasms?!?... wow.
person Jules
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! Can\'t say more, Must go take a cold shower.
person Fiery Slut
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9... I am so glad that you were able to update!!! This chapter was well worth the wait!!! I LOVE Hermione\'s means of getting even & the fact that she got what she needed in the bargain!!! Can\'t wait for more!!! Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^<
person thekillerbunny
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Update again soon!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! It is absolutely hilarious. You had me in stitches for a half an hour. Good lord, chapter 5 and then this last chapter were great! Bloody Brilliant! Ron is suchrat.rat... and Draco is oh so sexy.... grrrrr. Love it, please update soon!
person Fiery Slut
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Draco_Fan
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This story is great. I hope you update soon. I love the \'war\' between Draco and Hermione... It\'s great... I love the whole thing!!!!
person XxphoenixX
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, well, since you have accepted my challenge - you will get around to it, won\'t you? - I will certainly read your fabulous fics. I really love the first-person POV\'s in this. I usually find them awkward but it fits here. Harry is so cute... I really feel most fics don\'t do him justice ::pout::. Tea and sympathyhahahahaha. Draco is such a hottie... hmm he\'d make a perfect St. John... who knew I had such a one-track mind? GAH! The sexual frustration is terrible... yet wonderful. Just update soon, will ya? Before Draco, Hermione and I go insane. And then, if you have some time... write that Eyr Eyre fic ;)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8....... It was nice to see Zambini turn Draco down, being used has to end some time!!!

I really liked that Hermione was able to pop Ron, he Deserved it!!! I\'m sure that Harry has to be torn a bit over this whole thing!!!

Sounds like the RoR knew exactly what Hermione needed, maybe not to help the sexual tension too much, but to relieve most other forms of tension!!! Too bad that it was only a temporary fix;-)

Til Chapter 9, Deb >^..^<