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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have never been so loathed, then to see the end of this chapter! shreeek....I want more ;)
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Upon reading this chapter again....I noticed something that I didn\'t pick up on before. I wonder if the fact that Snape\'s parents were \'forced\' into an unhappy marriage will play into this plot of Snape himself being \'forced\' into marriage..if his attempts to have something better than what his parents had will have any affect on how he treats her as he gets to know her as his fiance, rather than just Miss Granger. Excellent chapter...very exciting!
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this story. I like the way you are taking time to develop whatever relationship will exist instead of having them jump immediately into passionate love from their previous feelings. Can\'t wait for updates!
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story - fireworks and a bit of communication - more, please.
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How sweet of the Griffyndor boys to look out for her. Why does Severus have to be so horrible, oh, because he is *shakes head.* Thanks.
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! First let me say, that one reason this story is so incredible is your awesome writing skills, and your ability to keep everyone in character. It makes everything more believable. This story is unfolding so nicely... I love the situations that are arising, aow tow the characters react to everything...u\'ru\'re doing a truly wonderful job! Please update!!!
~Leigh~
~Leigh~
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you\'re doing with this fic. You write so well and convincingly and I love your portrayal of both Snape and Hermione... feels really true to type! I also like the way this is starting as a marriage of convenience but I\'m sure will turn into a consummated one. Please update often!!
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh this Snape is much nastier than the other forced marriage challenges I\'ve read.
This is going tobe an intersting one as these to come to some sort of understanding.
This is going tobe an intersting one as these to come to some sort of understanding.
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please continue! Please, with sugar and Severus on top! ;)
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! This is SO good! @@ As soon as I figure how to add fave fics, I\'m gunna add this one! ^^ Keep up the good work!