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for On Marriage

by snailexpress

person Kiristeen
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this last chapter -- the two of them not quite opening up, but making those first tentative baby steps. : ) Well done.


Kiri
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 6-9............ I really do feel bad for Hermione!!! She has so much to deal with, a pain in the (_!_) that is Draco Malfoy & a future husband that doesn\'t seem to interested in much of anything where she is concerned:( He sure isn\'t making getting to know him better very easy for her!!! I hope that he lightens up a bit, for her sake!!! Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^<
person spaz141
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update.
person Kathy
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Excellent story, can\'t wait to see where this is going especially when it includes HG/SS and all the evil bastards.
Looking forward for your next installment. WELL DONE!!!
person Estrilda
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of course - he\'s read her file - what a sweet little tidbit - please update soon.
person DJ
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic...snarky Snape, and a fiesty Hemione...what could be better?!! I\'ll keep looking for this fic\'s updates. I\'ve really enjoyed how you\'ve let almost everyone stay true to character is a strange situation. Can\'t wait to see what Hermione expects from Snape, and vice versa.
person wizardingangel
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no you left it like that? I have got to know..............well any way keep up the great work and I will be reading this as often as I can.
person edgeworlds
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story. Wonderful characterization, pacing, and innovative concepts for the challenge. The slow pacing of the story suits the gradual character development very well, and I like the fact tyou\you\'ve been able to keep Snape and Hermione within their canon personalities. I enjoy lemons as much as the next person, but I also enjoy a bit of substantial storytelling to support it ;)

Wonderful writing, keep up the excellent work!
person Alisha
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww..that\'s so cute! \"I know your middle name.\" *giggles* Aaaannyway, loved this chapter. Wish Snape had been a little more nicer, but then again, what can you expect from him? Sincere Sunshine Snape? :P Loved the crosstalk as well, at least Snape has a good match for his own so called wittiness and sarcasm.
person RazorbladeRomance (Talia)
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE continue!! I am througly addicted.