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by snailexpress

person slashgoddess
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your story... please email me when you update... i want to find out what happens!
person Estrilda
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I suppose Hermione\'s mother would at least be able to find a book on handfasting in the Wicca section - she could send them one {smile}. This story is really cute. There are so many marriage challenge stories, but yours has the originality of my favorite snarky Snape showing little bits of kindness and humour when necessary - I am certain any spy worth his salt could do this.
person bansidh
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Teehee! Yay, snarky!Snape. Loved that Hermione\'s mum sends Severus a magazine. Too rich. Thanks for the update.
person spaz141
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update.
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved that Hermione\'s mom sent Severus a groom\'s magazine. Very funny.
Keep writing.
person GEmory
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The bit about the magazines was very funny. Really liked the \"getting to know each other\" part too. Very sensible of them. :)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10..... I really enjoyed this chapter!!! It was nice to see what Hermione said to her friends, preparing them as well as herself!!!

I think that the magazine bit was FABULOUS!!! I think it is so funny that her mom sent a magazine to Severus!!! If nothing else she did accomplish 2 things, 1. she is showing her acceptance & 2. she put them in a position to have to talk about their wedding!!!

Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^<
person Kiristeen
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol This latest chapter was a riot. I loved it. : )~
person Dame Niamh
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story! It\'s always a pleasure to be drawn into a tale by the smooth unravelling of plot and the interesting details:
\"Hermione grabbed the last of her things and moved the door, Ginny limping behind, trying to get her foot into her shoe as they headed down the stairs.\"
That\'s a real-life touch which adds so much, not just to Ginny\'s character, but to the atmosphere. Keep up the good work, and may we have some more, please?
Blessed be
Dame Niamh
person Carrie
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks like fun! You writing seems very natural, as are your characters thus far. Can\'t wait for things to start heating up, teehee...