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by snailexpress

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11... This is so sweet, but frustrating for the girls, having her mother help her find a wedding dress!!! I am really looking forward to seeing how their ceremony goes, hope she knocks Severus off his feet!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<
person FriendlyQuark
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When my roomie got married we went through magazines for months and ended up making her her dress. The fashions for wedding dresses are appalling these d I c I cracked up over this chapter and it was wonderful.
person FriendlyQuark
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really cute. I mean that in a good way. I like how sensible she is and how you have him snarky and uncomfortable but not cruel. They seem to be handling the situation with admirable aplomb. Since Draco petitioned for her, is he acting out of jealousy or sour grapes? I would be interested to know more about his and Nott\'s reactions to this.
person brittni
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it! i laughed so hard at severus\' reaction to the wedding magazine. keep going, its quite wonderful.
person Talia
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have got to continue before I go completely crazy!! I am loving the hell out of this story!!
person TESA
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I left this story at chapter five and was very plesantly suprised to find five more chapters less than a month later. It\'s developing excellently and I can\'t wait to read more about their relationship. The wedding magazines were too funny. I can just see Severus taking off Hermione\'s garter and throwing it in the crowd. lol. Cheerio, TESA
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I thought it was cute when Severus was completely disgusted by the bridal magazines and when he was asking if Hermoine wanted all of that. BTW, I totally agree with Hermoine-- a small ceremony is the best and it\'s cheaper! ^_^

Anyhoo, update when you\'ve got the chance!
Ciao^_^
person kallie
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is a very enjoyable read. You have kept both Snape anrmiormione in character quite well. I think you\'re doing an especially good job with snape. I guess my only bit of criticism is Ron\'s reaction to the whole situation. I think that he would be a bit more upset with the marriage since it seems he and Hermione were involved romanitcally before the start of the story.
person Ashley
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say I love your story. Everyone seems very in character, and I can\'t wait to see how Hermione and Snape\'s relationship progresses!
person giova
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull, I am really enjoying this!