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for On Marriage

by snailexpress

schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story so far! Please update agand and soon!

Tiffany
person Mary
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up!
person JasperPress77
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait to read more....drools....I love this fic it\'s both sweet and funny, plus I think you keep the characters in-character for the most part and that\'s always important. Good job !
person FilleBleue
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Reaaaaallly interesting story so far... PLEASE update soon! I really like the direction this story is going and admire your writing prowess...
More more more!!
person Bloode
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing this story! I\'m beginning to like it, but I can only hope that Severus and Hermione can reach a common ground... I can\'t see anyone falling in love with him, but it\'d be nice, lol! Keep up the good work!
person Jayle
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pleaz Pleaz Pleaz, I have waited sNG tNG to read this chapter and you cut it short? ..::Sniffles::. Pleaz Update as fast as you can.
person Bambu
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would\'ve commented on each chapter, except that I read them all in one fell swoop -- greedily as if with a large gooey chocolate cake. This is a bit like cake... delicious. I\'m enjoying your take on the entire story... Severus is so very much in character ... and bending slightly. Hermione is as pragmatic as ever. I like where you\'ve gone with is, and I\'m looking forward to your next chapters.
person raija
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Remind me to never take mum with me whille shopping wedding dresses.
person fanficassassin
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This may seem to you to be picky, but I would point out that the ENGLISH civil war occurred a lot earlier than the American civil war, which I surmise is the one you are referring to when talking about the dress.
person excessivelyperky
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes, the Shopping Trip From Hell. The only thing really needed to make it complete would be for them to run into Molly Weasley, who would naturally attempt to take it over (\'just to help a bit, love!\'). I\'d pay money to watch _that_ one!