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by snailexpress

person June W
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 15 - YAY, you updated!!!!! Lovely chapter, and I\'d still like to know what Severus told Daphne; perhaps Hermione should tell him that she observed his dance with Daphne was the first time Daphne had smiled all day. And - ahem - the wedding night isn\'t over, is it? There\'s more coming? Thanks for the update, and I\'ll be waiting for Chapter 16!
person PirateAurora
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story...waiting patiently for more!!!
person MissTrish
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One of the best SS/HG 'ships on the net - congratulations! A ripping-good read! :-)
person Talia
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOHH Not fair!! Major Cliffie!! Please update ASAP!! I am going nuts!!
person Talia
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, I LOVED the ceremony, it almost made me cry!!
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have a silly question. What is WIKTT?
person m.brigid
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much! This is good. I am enjoying your incredibly taciturn Snape very much. Hermione ell-ell-done, also, although I suspect I'd have been far, far more nervous if I'd been subject to an arranged marriage at her age. At my current age, I often suspect an outside arrangement is as good a beginning as any other. Ah, well. At any rate, thank you very much for the good read.
person Arestoktra
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! what's coming next? hmm? hehe i don't think Severus will sleep with Hermione "that" quickly although they're married now but hmm maybe they'll start to care for each other or maybe Severus the God of nessness will resque her or something like that which will lead them to a "bed"... lots of opportunities about getting Hermione laid comes to my mind so i stop now:P good work. i like the plot also nd i like it comes longer in each more chapter :)
person Keebi
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far this is my favorite Marriage Law Challenge fic! The characters all seem incredibly accurate (well, by my view of them, anyway ;-)) and I'm loving the plotline. Keep up the good work!
person Mystedmoon
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Write more please! This is sooo good! I love it.