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for On Marriage

by snailexpress

person Kiristeen
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOL Caught while making good his escape. : )~ Love it. Well done on the last two chapters. I definitely look forward to seeing more of your y.
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Kiri
person Laura
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good start, enjoyable and promising. Looking forward to the story unfolding in future chapters. Keep up the good work and thank you for writing.
person Tanya
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve got a good start to this fic! Your grasp of the character\'s personalities is great and you write well! I am looking forward to your next update!
Tanya~
person Aoibheann
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*applause*
Excellent beginning! I like that you\'ve made Harry intelligent wnough to see the facts for what they are. Keepng, ng, I can\'t wait to read more!
person Topaz
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I must say that your story is the first one I\'ve read that finally explains why Ron Weasley couldn\'t marry Hermione. None of the many other stories I\'ve read covered that point. I\'okinoking forward to more of your story. Please update soon!!!
person Raija
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great.
person spaz141
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione. At least with this challenge she got have at least 50 different kinds of weddings. Thanks.
person Tesa
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Lol. I love Sev/Hermione stories! When I first thought about the pairing, I was totally grossed out, but after I read one story, I couldn\'t stop! They\'re really meant to be together! I love this challenge, it\'s the best! I\'m already reading up on more than 5 takes on it, and this one looks really promissing! Could you please email me when you have another chapter up?
Thanx,
Tesa
person Stratyllis
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffie. I hope you have more up soon. I\'ve said it before and will say it again, this challenge has produced the most wonderful fics. I can\'t wait to see more of your spin on it. s a s a great start. Your spelling and gramer are very nice. Keep up the good work.