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Excellent beginning! : ) I really liked the touch of Snape waiting for the scroll at the window. Can\'t wait for more.


Kiri

Poor Hermoine, poor Ron (he almost had a chance with this one). Thanks.

I like! Can\'t wait to see what happens in part 2.

I love this fic!!! So cute and definitely in character! Keep it going! And if you need a beta reader, let me know.

~~ Lady Tuesday ~~

It\'s going good so far! I like tak take on the situation. I like it that you began during the summer rather than during the school year. Makes it a big more personal I think. I\'m looking forward to reading more! I LIke the added touch of the family ring :)

Super!
Michelle

A very good begining. I hope to see more in the future. Your writing is very nice. Keep up the great work.

I just read chapters 1-3 of your story & you have done a WONDERFUL job so far!!!

I have been reading many of the Marriage Law stories & each one is different. It\'s hard not to come upon a couple of things that are similar in the stories when everyone is working with the same things. Because of that fact I am really amazed that they are all different enough to know that the authors have tried very hard to make the story their own. Your story is no exception!!! You have added things that are different from the other stories I\'ve read & have shown that you are making this story your own!!!

I look forward to seeing where you take it from here!!! Deb >^..^<

Excellent beginning! I can\'t wait for more. Please do let us know at WIKTT when you update! You have Hermione and everyone well in character, and you have a great writing style. A small nit - it\'s \"free rein\" (as in horses) rather than \"free reign\"....

great story keep up the great work

Hi i really like the way you have chosen to write this story and how you portraye Hermione and how you ended this chapter was brilliant. Please please pretty please update soon cause i want to know what happends next *grin*