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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this and look forward to more chapters.
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December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thanks.
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The scene between Sev, He, Hermione, and the Grangers was excellent! Brava! : ) All of this story, in fact, has been very enjoyable. I look forward to reading more.
Kiri
Kiri
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the balance that you have achieved in Hermione\'s parents\' reaction. So many respondants to the WIKITT challenge have either had them accept too quickly and unreservedly or else not convinced you that they have an ounce of sense. Hermione is their child; she gets her common sense from them. I also enjoyed her finally coming to terms with the situation in the library. I\'ll be looking for the next updathankhanks for writing.
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Looking forward to more
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
goddess this story is so good! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well at least that when well. I still feel sorry for poor Hermione. He Barely speaks to her. He\'s never around. How is she supposed to get used to the idea if he avoids her like the plague. Still this is a very well written peice and Snapes avoidance and attitudes are quite in character! I look forward to readding more!
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!!! That was so gentlemanly coming from Snape! I can\'t wait till the wedding date. Have yoen gen generous or what? Updating so soon! Thanx! I love this story! Hell, I love Hermione/Severus stories. lol. Brilliant! Please keep me informed as to any updates.
Luv,
TESA
Luv,
TESA
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! I hope that you continue!
Ciao ^_^
Ciao ^_^
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is nicely done and it\'s your first fic. Forced marriage romance is not easy as a first venture. It is a touchy journey of two people coming to terms with each other, especially someone like Snape. It\'s not the same as boy meets girl. Much of that journey depends on whether you have a happy ending or not.
Snape is a difficult character, and I liked that FINALLY someone went to Hermione\'s paraents and explained it, and they ranted in a way one would expect. I give you a major plus that her parents challenged Snape on her education.
It was very interesting to see Snape slip into the \"sincere role of protector\', but we all know his spy skills and I wonder if this was just an act toplacate teh Grangers and he is going back to his normal nasty disposition with Hermione. Will he keep his promise to the Grangers concerning Hermione.
The other event is when Nott or Malfoy meet up with Snape.
It seems you\'ve given them some time between the engagement and the wedding, this is good, it gives them a little more time.
My only advice is to keep in mind that Hermione is Gryffidor, I don\'t expect her to be totally reduced to a crying mush under Snapes harsh demeanor. We still don\'t really know Snape\'s feelings in this either. Was he really coerce Dum Dumbldeore?
Snape is a difficult character, and I liked that FINALLY someone went to Hermione\'s paraents and explained it, and they ranted in a way one would expect. I give you a major plus that her parents challenged Snape on her education.
It was very interesting to see Snape slip into the \"sincere role of protector\', but we all know his spy skills and I wonder if this was just an act toplacate teh Grangers and he is going back to his normal nasty disposition with Hermione. Will he keep his promise to the Grangers concerning Hermione.
The other event is when Nott or Malfoy meet up with Snape.
It seems you\'ve given them some time between the engagement and the wedding, this is good, it gives them a little more time.
My only advice is to keep in mind that Hermione is Gryffidor, I don\'t expect her to be totally reduced to a crying mush under Snapes harsh demeanor. We still don\'t really know Snape\'s feelings in this either. Was he really coerce Dum Dumbldeore?