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by singtoangels

person Jaid
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oi, I must admit I am highly jealous of the girl... Two gorgeous guys... Although I do pity Malfoy. *snicker* I don\'t wish Ron on anyone...

person Sky
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my heck that was sexy. I really love Fred and George in het situations, especially together with a girl. This is a fabulously sexy story and you\'re such a good writer, too. The whole paragraph about the peach and teh juice dribbling down your hand -- that was inspired! What a beautiful way to describe it. (I\'m also a Remus/Hermione shipper and I\'m off to read your story Savage Heat!) If you have an archive or updates list, please add me. This is such a wonderful story. I\'m going to save it for later reading. Fred and George were exceptionally naughty! Do you have any other F/G stories where they\'re in a threesome? The image of Hermione between them is really hot! Well done!
person Ardeo
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When I first read this, I was a bit apprehensive, and I was quite sure that FW/HG/GW would squick me entirely. While reading it, however, the thoughts that occurred to me were not: \"Oh, that\'s disgusting\" or \"That\'s so gross.\" It was more along the lines of: \"This is really well-written\" and \"Wow, this is great.\" It was just hot, I guess. A lot of threesome fics are just *there.* They don\'t have any basis at all, they seem entirely unlikely, and the characters are totally OoC. Granted, I don\'t think threesomes are likely to happen under any circumstance in the HP world, but this fic just made it seem entirely plausible and likely. Almost like it should happen, ha ha. Now *that* would be an amusing bit to have show up in one of the books. I don\'t have much criticism to offer . . . maybe it would have been nice to get some deeper Hermione-thoughts. But that\'s really not a big thing at all. More like an extra bonus. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading it, and more in the future would be a pleasant surprise. *Hint, hint* :)
person shaolin
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, more! I love the twins...Weasleys make me weak
weekly!!! Any more or is that the end? More!
person Lessa
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely evil! I just loved it. So this was a prequel to another story? Can\'t wait to read it and see what happens next. You know I almost feel y foy for Ron but think the idea of Draco having to deal with lovesick Ronnikins sounds pretty darn funny.