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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! I started reading \"Don\'t lie to me\" yesterday, thinking it was going to be one of those really crappy self-insertion thingies but I couldn\'t keep myself away from the story! I spent 24h straight in front of my computer reading! I barely stopped to eat and go to the loo! Ooh! You just have to keep the story going! I wanna know what\'s going to happen to them and if they\'ll have a kid for Voldy... I think you finished in a total cliffhanger. I\'m dying to know how it goes on. I don\'t care if you have to write all night, you neeeeed to keep going with this! If only so I don\'t lose my sanity :D
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I had to review it because it surprised me by being so good. Usually I only read slash, because I am tired of all the sobby romance there are, whenever there is a girl involved. I prefere it to a bit rough and the two are as equals. So I was exly ply pleased to read your story, I simply love younninnning little witch who give as good as she gets. Do you know of any stories kind of like yours, becuase then I will consider to begin reading some het as well?
What I also think is great in the way the story is written, is that Snape stays in character, which is something only few people can do. You really seem to understand him, and his reasons for doing the things he does.
Oh a little funny incident while I was reading the story: I had an apointment with a friend I hadn\'t seen in a long time, but I had such a hard time letting go of the story, because I had just come to the part when Snape had given her the Mark. So I ended up just turning off the computer and running to the car, and having to speed to get there only 10 min late. Because I had had to stop before I got to the end of the scene, I could feel her anger against Snape in my whole system. You had maneged to really get me into the story. I ended up turning on the radio and concentration on what was being said, to expell her anger from me, till I could continue reading when I got home late that night.
Are you planning up continuing the story?
Sna na
I had to review it because it surprised me by being so good. Usually I only read slash, because I am tired of all the sobby romance there are, whenever there is a girl involved. I prefere it to a bit rough and the two are as equals. So I was exly ply pleased to read your story, I simply love younninnning little witch who give as good as she gets. Do you know of any stories kind of like yours, becuase then I will consider to begin reading some het as well?
What I also think is great in the way the story is written, is that Snape stays in character, which is something only few people can do. You really seem to understand him, and his reasons for doing the things he does.
Oh a little funny incident while I was reading the story: I had an apointment with a friend I hadn\'t seen in a long time, but I had such a hard time letting go of the story, because I had just come to the part when Snape had given her the Mark. So I ended up just turning off the computer and running to the car, and having to speed to get there only 10 min late. Because I had had to stop before I got to the end of the scene, I could feel her anger against Snape in my whole system. You had maneged to really get me into the story. I ended up turning on the radio and concentration on what was being said, to expell her anger from me, till I could continue reading when I got home late that night.
Are you planning up continuing the story?
Sna na
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June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love it! Well done!!!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a sequal. Or better yet, tell me that one has already been published. I stumbled upon this site and upon the first book and I have been hooked.
I have not read too many fan fictions (OK, So I have only ready your stories). However, I LOVE S.S.
You are a very gifted writer. I look forward to more fics from you. I have even joined the potions master group on Yahoo just to see if you have anything new.
Great Book.
I have not read too many fan fictions (OK, So I have only ready your stories). However, I LOVE S.S.
You are a very gifted writer. I look forward to more fics from you. I have even joined the potions master group on Yahoo just to see if you have anything new.
Great Book.
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to echo what everyone else has been saying - \'Secretly Slytherin\' (and, of course, \'Don\'t Lie to Me,\' as well), is definitely something special. I honestly loved every part of it, from your perfect portrayal of Snape to your charcharacter creation, Helena, and all the twists and turns you so masterfully guided them through. It\'s a very intelligent, very alluring, and very sexy story - I\'m just sad it\'s over. Whenever you have time to work on the promised sequel, please do so. Until then, I\'m looking forward to reading all your other stories.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
was looking for snape fiction on this site- found Don\'t Lie to Me at 10pm. slept that night at 2am. thank you so much for your wonderful work, it was great reading it and you were absolutely brill with your treatment of snape. =D alright enough lavish praise for now but write more!!
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, that was just delightfully wonderful. i\'ve been reading for the past two and a half days straight. the whole thing. i cannot wait for you to start the sequel, and i hope you do not turn into one of those authors that don\'t finish a story completely. stories don\'t really have a complete ending unless everyone in the world is dead and it exploded along with the universe, is there? but hey. most suffice in being one. i cannot wait until this continues. i\'ll be waiting!
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha.... Malfoy!!! That was great! Really enjoying this. Thanks!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I first read your story a year ago and really enjoyed it. I just finished re-reading it and I was happy to find that it was just as good as I remembered. I love your Snape and the way you can make him a \"good\" person without compromising his snarkyness (Which is why we love him) :) As well, Helena is one of my favorite OCs! She is attractive because she is flawed and very human--unlike so many others.
...Any chance of a sequel? Soon? ::attempts cute puppy dog stare::
...Any chance of a sequel? Soon? ::attempts cute puppy dog stare::
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had passed over this story a few times, unsure as to whether or not I really wanted to read it. I am SOOOO glad I finally did! I love Helena and the way she somehow seems to squirm out of trouble just long enough to find even more. ::chuckles:: And Severus.... seems to me that you have him nailed to a T personality-wise compared to a lot of fanfic writers out there that go from snarky-greasy-git to mushy-lovesick-professor in the space of a single chapter. Anyhow, hope to read more once you get the chance (and the inspiration).